This is seriously my favorite chapter so far. I kid you not.
The first scene was so good. You always do Chlollie a ridiculous amount of justice. I love how Oliver came out in the middle of Bart and Chloe's conversation while Bart is hitting on Chloe of course as always haha and then after he lets Bart know he can leave early (Nice way of saying BTFO my woman LOL) He's all...are you seeing someone? LMAO I died at how uncomfortable he was. I love it. It's like he doesn't feel like he has the right to ask but at the same time Chloe is his and he doesn't want to share even if she's not technically his (she is!) LMAO
I love that he goes back to the loft with her and it's easy to see that he's impressed with what she's doing but what I also love is that he's speaking up more and putting himself and his thoughts out there. It's almost like you can see hints of the leader forming *happy sigh* Have I mentioned how much I love Chlollie? Oh and yeah you totally know you're thinking about what the other Oliver said HAHA <3
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Aw, it's been awhile since I've gotten a two-part comment from you. *hugs* I'm so happy this is your favorite chapter so far. I liked it a lot more when I edited it than when I wrote it. LMAO. Thank you so much for the wonderful comments. Hahaha. Ollie was sort of staking claim to Chloe...but he wasn't jealous of Bart. I know you know that, but I feel the need to stress it. He was curious if there was someone else just in case he needed to destroy him. LMAO. I'm also glad you liked Ollie's emerging leader skills.
Aw, thanks! I actually do ship Clois pretty hard; probably more than most Chlollie fans. I just find them adorable and Lois is the only person who really made Clark fun and likable. Seriously, I would die if I lost my phone so I feel her pain here. Luckily Clark was able to get it back for her. Come here often? Hahahaaha. That's pretty much what she said. <----hahahahaha. I didn't mean to write that. OMG, today has been interesting
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Obviously I loved you before this haha, but this chapter is made of so much win that I'm going to hug it forever for years and years to come *sounds crazy* LOL
I genuinely like Clark in this story. Usually with him I'm like okay your there where's Chlollie LMAO, but I actually genuinely like the person he is here or you know cute silly farm boyish but there for Oliver and his red face and thinking about Lois and OMG when he blurted that out about Chloe I nearly died. I seriously love your version of Clark Kent. He should ALWAYS be written like this.
Also I KNEW he loved Chloe!!!!! Hehe This might actually be my favorite chapter out of all the ones you've written so far. I like how we get to see Oliver focused and practicing and I like that you're showing the reader he's obviously changing. He really cares about the people around him asking what's on Clark's mind wanting to prove to Chloe that he's there for her.
This is him not becoming the other Oliver, but becoming
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And thanks for gushing. ♥ I'm glad you like Clark. He's so tricky to write so it's nice being able to shape him a bit since he's an AU version here.
Of course he loves Chloe! He's Ollie. Ollie loves Chloe. He's definitely trying to change and it's still awkward for him after so many years of not really having any friends. Aw, he was so lonely. Anyway, that's it, exactly. He's a different Oliver and he wants to be the best person he can be; no one else. He's definitely getting closer to achieving it too.
Chlollie is the best. I'm so happy you're enjoying this story. ♥
I love this part. I like that Oliver was relieved to hear Chloe wasn't involved with anyone, and that Oliver was nice to Bart. I also like that Bart still flirts with Chloe despite knowing she's not interested. Hee. He amuses me.
The Clois encounter made me laugh, from Lois yelling at him for making her drop her phone to him probably thinking that dinner just meant dinner. I also really like the slowly building friendship between this Clark and Oliver. I like that Ollie is still arrogant, even if he is changing and I'm glad he's acknowledging his feelings for Chloe.
Thanks, Angie! I'm happy you enjoyed this. Hahaha, Bart amuses me too. Glad you enjoyed the Clois part and the budding Ollie/Clark friendship. Oh yeah, his arrogance isn't going anywhere. He just reins it in a little better. ;) Thanks so much for the comments!
Aw, thank you! I'm glad that you enjoyed it. I wouldn't count on Chloe revealing her feelings any time soon. She's nowhere near ready to acknowledge them and she can live in denial better than anyone.
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The first scene was so good. You always do Chlollie a ridiculous amount of justice. I love how Oliver came out in the middle of Bart and Chloe's conversation while Bart is hitting on Chloe of course as always haha and then after he lets Bart know he can leave early (Nice way of saying BTFO my woman LOL) He's all...are you seeing someone? LMAO I died at how uncomfortable he was. I love it. It's like he doesn't feel like he has the right to ask but at the same time Chloe is his and he doesn't want to share even if she's not technically his (she is!) LMAO
I love that he goes back to the loft with her and it's easy to see that he's impressed with what she's doing but what I also love is that he's speaking up more and putting himself and his thoughts out there. It's almost like you can see hints of the leader forming *happy sigh* Have I mentioned how much I love Chlollie? Oh and yeah you totally know you're thinking about what the other Oliver said HAHA <3 ( ... )
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Aw, thanks! I actually do ship Clois pretty hard; probably more than most Chlollie fans. I just find them adorable and Lois is the only person who really made Clark fun and likable. Seriously, I would die if I lost my phone so I feel her pain here. Luckily Clark was able to get it back for her. Come here often? Hahahaaha. That's pretty much what she said. <----hahahahaha. I didn't mean to write that. OMG, today has been interesting ( ... )
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I LOVE YOU.
Obviously I loved you before this haha, but this chapter is made of so much win that I'm going to hug it forever for years and years to come *sounds crazy* LOL
I genuinely like Clark in this story. Usually with him I'm like okay your there where's Chlollie LMAO, but I actually genuinely like the person he is here or you know cute silly farm boyish but there for Oliver and his red face and thinking about Lois and OMG when he blurted that out about Chloe I nearly died. I seriously love your version of Clark Kent. He should ALWAYS be written like this.
Also I KNEW he loved Chloe!!!!! Hehe This might actually be my favorite chapter out of all the ones you've written so far. I like how we get to see Oliver focused and practicing and I like that you're showing the reader he's obviously changing. He really cares about the people around him asking what's on Clark's mind wanting to prove to Chloe that he's there for her.
This is him not becoming the other Oliver, but becoming ( ... )
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And thanks for gushing. ♥ I'm glad you like Clark. He's so tricky to write so it's nice being able to shape him a bit since he's an AU version here.
Of course he loves Chloe! He's Ollie. Ollie loves Chloe. He's definitely trying to change and it's still awkward for him after so many years of not really having any friends. Aw, he was so lonely. Anyway, that's it, exactly. He's a different Oliver and he wants to be the best person he can be; no one else. He's definitely getting closer to achieving it too.
Chlollie is the best. I'm so happy you're enjoying this story. ♥
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The Clois encounter made me laugh, from Lois yelling at him for making her drop her phone to him probably thinking that dinner just meant dinner. I also really like the slowly building friendship between this Clark and Oliver. I like that Ollie is still arrogant, even if he is changing and I'm glad he's acknowledging his feelings for Chloe.
Can't wait for more!
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I keep my fingers crossed that we hear something like that from Chloe in one of the next Chapters.
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