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serafina19 August 13 2011, 21:55:19 UTC
Almost hard to believe this one's over, but know that I enjoyed it from the first word to the last.

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ihearttvsnark August 14 2011, 01:09:40 UTC
Thanks, Sera. :)

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sxymami0909 August 13 2011, 22:06:38 UTC
First off poor Chloe *hugs her* Nightmares are not cool beans. :(

“What about Lex?” Chloe asked as her mind jumped back to being in the room with him. She remembered him leaving her alone with Oliver, but everything after that was hazy. Lex had seen Oliver’s face. He knew Oliver was the Green Arrow and by now he probably knew that Chloe’s power allowed her to heal. She recalled Lex smugly telling them that she had been the one to give away Oliver’s secret. Her stomach churned at the memory. She was never going to forgive herself for Oliver’s identity being compromised because of her." <== Awwww poor Chloe and guilt! This is so in character for her. She really does always putt he blame on herself ( ... )

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ihearttvsnark August 14 2011, 01:28:05 UTC
Aw, thanks Cori!

Thank you so much! I'm really happy you enjoyed this story. Awwwww. Thanks for the compliments. You know how much I love writing Lois so that makes me really happy. And you know I strive for characterization above all else so I love you even more for saying those nice things. :)

Yay, for happy sighs. :) I'm so glad you liked that part and yes, it was important that Chloe made the decision for herself, especially since she already tried the selfless thing and it sort of blew up in her face.

*hugs* ♥

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geek_or_unique August 13 2011, 22:56:31 UTC
"The man looked good in a suit.

“Close your mouth, cuz, you’re already sleeping with him and his ego is big enough,” Lois teased as she handed Chloe a glass of champagne."

FAVORITE part of the whole fic, the man does look good in a suit. And the group hug, second favorite part of the whole fic. LMAO
I'm exaggerating a little, but those two parts really were awesome.

I can't believe this is over, this fic was so good and the ending was perfect. This chapter was so good, it made me miss fanfiction, you know what was not an easy thing to do lately.

This is a little short, because I have to go back to my studying and because I don't think there is a word in the dictionary to say how awesome this fic was. Absofuckingfantastic?

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ihearttvsnark August 14 2011, 01:43:28 UTC
Hahaha, I love you, sister. ♥

I'm glad you enjoyed those two parts to much. Thank you so much for all your comments. I'm happy you enjoyed this fic and I love that you came up with a unique word to describe it. And that's a huge compliment because I know how you feel about fanfic right now.

Good luck with your studying. :)

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paulingui August 13 2011, 23:40:42 UTC
I can't believe it's over, it was such an amazing fic :). It really became my fav since the beginning so, I'm a little bit sad now it's over, but the ending was perfect.

I'm so glad Chloe join the team full time, she's going to do what she wants, and with Ollie by her side, yay!.

Not only it was an awesome fic, it was awesome chapters, and a perfect ending, everything was flawless Mandy.

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ihearttvsnark August 14 2011, 01:44:43 UTC
Aw, thank you so much! That's a lovely thing to say. It makes me really happy that you enjoyed this story as much as you did. Thank you for always taking the time to comment. I'm happy you enjoyed the ending. :)

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danisige August 13 2011, 23:57:05 UTC
Lovely story. :D

I really liked that Chloe became full time WT in the end and She and Oliver could make their relationship works in all aspects. :D

It was good to read the development of their love, they opened up about how they feel for each other. Great story. Great story.:)

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ihearttvsnark August 14 2011, 01:45:52 UTC
Thank you! I'm so glad you enjoyed this story so much and I'm happy you liked the ending. Thanks for taking the time to comment. I really appreciate it. :)

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