Such an awesome update! I love that Ollie's get flashbacks, its a nice touch, adding some more layers to the story. Especially with Tess and Chloe's opposing views on what to tell him. I also like how he could tell that there was something important to Chloe that he couldn't remember, its nice that he could still read her even in such a different setting.
Suprise AC at the end was awesome. I wasn't at all expecting him, I probably should have been considering the story banner, but I wasn't and I'm excited to see what kind of twist he brings to the story. And its nice to see an inclusion of AC in a Chlollie story. He sometimes seems like he gets left out more so than some of the other JL members.
Amazing job, I can't wait until you have a chance to post more!
Thank you! I'm really glad you like the flashbacks, there are definitely more coming. Ollie's connection to Chloe is still strong, but he doesn't understand it yet.
Everyone seems surprised to see AC which made me happy. But I think you hit the nail on the head. He's one of those characters people don't really use a lot (myself included) so it's easy to forget that he exists even when he is right there in the banner.
Yay, an update! This is a fun story, though wow, it's a super complicated plot. ;) I really want Chloe to just kiss him already to see if that helps him remember her. :D Hope to see more from you soon!
Thanks for the comments! It is a bit complicated, but I'm glad you still think it's fun. Ha, I want Chloe to just kiss him too, but she needs to resist.
Poor Tess. She's got nothing but problems in this between the Kandorians in her house and Oliver accusing her of being the bad guy. And of course he remembers the knife incident. Haha.
It feels wrong to say that I'm happy you're out of the loop, but I sort of am. It's supposed to be confusing. This story is more difficult to write than the other ones I've done because even though I know exactly where it's going and why things are the way they are, there's a lot of stuff to balance along the way.
Thank you so much for all the wonderful comments. ♥
First of all, I'm glad the world didnt ended so I got to read this chapter. And your timing is perfect, because I'm dying of boredom in class. Remember what I told you this week about Italian and fast food? This is Italian with ice cream. I love their reactions about everything, Oliver is confused but deep down he knows he can trust Chloe, and Chloe, even though all she wants is jump on his arms, she still thinking rationally and is afraid of ruining their future together. But my favorite thing about this chapter is the Oliver/Tess interaction, he trusts her, he doesn't, she wants him to trust her but she has to be a badass before everything else. Their relationship was always complicated, when you throw his confused memory in the mix, you have this amazing scene. And AC! What the hell? Lois loves a twist. I love it, sister.
I'm so happy that you're enjoying this. Poor Ollie really has no idea what's going on and that's hard for Chloe because she just wants to be close to him and she can't be.
I know I've told you this before but I love the Ollie/Tess dynamic. It was one of the reasons I wanted to use her in this story.
Haha, Lois does love a twist. Thanks for the comments.
Wow AC remembering Chloe was missing and that Oliver was going to leave to find her threw me for a loop. I really thought that Tess and Chloe would be the only ones to remember. It's odd that Zatanna's spell would be so unpredictable, or maybe it has to do with how Oliver used his wish...
Thanks! I think most people were surprised by the AC twist. There's a reason Zatanna did what she did and it does have to do with Ollie's wish...and wow, let me see if I can make that more vague for you. Haha. I'm glad you're still enjoying the story. Thanks for the comments.
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Suprise AC at the end was awesome. I wasn't at all expecting him, I probably should have been considering the story banner, but I wasn't and I'm excited to see what kind of twist he brings to the story. And its nice to see an inclusion of AC in a Chlollie story. He sometimes seems like he gets left out more so than some of the other JL members.
Amazing job, I can't wait until you have a chance to post more!
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Everyone seems surprised to see AC which made me happy. But I think you hit the nail on the head. He's one of those characters people don't really use a lot (myself included) so it's easy to forget that he exists even when he is right there in the banner.
Thanks so much for reading and commenting!
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Poor Tess. She's got nothing but problems in this between the Kandorians in her house and Oliver accusing her of being the bad guy. And of course he remembers the knife incident. Haha.
It feels wrong to say that I'm happy you're out of the loop, but I sort of am. It's supposed to be confusing. This story is more difficult to write than the other ones I've done because even though I know exactly where it's going and why things are the way they are, there's a lot of stuff to balance along the way.
Thank you so much for all the wonderful comments. ♥
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Remember what I told you this week about Italian and fast food? This is Italian with ice cream.
I love their reactions about everything, Oliver is confused but deep down he knows he can trust Chloe, and Chloe, even though all she wants is jump on his arms, she still thinking rationally and is afraid of ruining their future together.
But my favorite thing about this chapter is the Oliver/Tess interaction, he trusts her, he doesn't, she wants him to trust her but she has to be a badass before everything else. Their relationship was always complicated, when you throw his confused memory in the mix, you have this amazing scene.
And AC! What the hell? Lois loves a twist.
I love it, sister.
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I'm so happy that you're enjoying this. Poor Ollie really has no idea what's going on and that's hard for Chloe because she just wants to be close to him and she can't be.
I know I've told you this before but I love the Ollie/Tess dynamic. It was one of the reasons I wanted to use her in this story.
Haha, Lois does love a twist. Thanks for the comments.
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:) Loved it!
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