And here I was sitting just wishing on an update :D You blow me away. Very well thought out and I love how you still incorporate tidbits from the seasons while you move along.
Btw classic Lois vs Chloe and the guys not having a clue, genius!
Aw, thank you! I'm really happy you're enjoying the story. Glad you liked the Chlo-Lo tension and the guys being clueless. That scene was fun to write. :)
Yay, I'm glad you agreed with Lex's reasoning. I couldn't remember if the show ever gave a reason for him buying it and I was much too lazy to actually look into it, but that reason made sense to me. Of course, he has another motive that will be revealed later, because it's Lex and he's all complicated. ;)
Chloe is insecure, but Lois is going to do her best to beat it out of her, possibly even literally because that's Lois. (And I always like it better when she knows about Clark, so I'm glad you like that too).
Yay! I'm happy you're enjoying Ollie/Victor. In Justice, it really seemed like the guys had a tight bond and it bugs me that the show just let that fade away and make it seem like Ollie was all alone in the world. :(
Thank you so much for all the wonderful comments! I'm really glad you're enjoying this and I'm sorry it took so long to post this chapter. I'll try to get the next one done soon.
BTW - I love your restraint in avoiding season 10 stuff. I would not be able to do that.
Yeah. I could feel Chloe's sadness and anxiety over Oliver's possible leaving and I kinda felt it too even though I didn't think he'd just leave her behind. The Ollie/Vic interaction was entertaining--I really do like the way you write the various JL friendships. Lex is such a slimy bastard. Blech.
I think the most amusing part to me was the Chlo-Lo in front of Ollie and Lois talking about responsibility.
This line: Chloe looked like she was thinking about taking the knife out of Lois’s hand and stabbing her with it and that wasn’t a good sign made me giggle. And the line about Chloe deciding to just smother Lois in her sleep with a pillow made me laugh, too.
SO glad Ollie asked Chloe to go with them. I can't wait for more! Great job, as always!
Yes, poor Chloe is letting her insecurities get the better of her. :( I'm so glad you're enjoying the JL stuff, all the boys will be back for the next chapter.
I'm happy you enjoyed the Chlo-Lo threats. Haha. That was fun to write.
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Btw classic Lois vs Chloe and the guys not having a clue, genius!
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Chloe is insecure, but Lois is going to do her best to beat it out of her, possibly even literally because that's Lois. (And I always like it better when she knows about Clark, so I'm glad you like that too).
Yay! I'm happy you're enjoying Ollie/Victor. In Justice, it really seemed like the guys had a tight bond and it bugs me that the show just let that fade away and make it seem like Ollie was all alone in the world. :(
Thank you so much for all the wonderful comments! I'm really glad you're enjoying this and I'm sorry it took so long to post this chapter. I'll try to get the next one done soon.
BTW - I love your restraint in avoiding season 10 stuff. I would not be able to do that.
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I think the most amusing part to me was the Chlo-Lo in front of Ollie and Lois talking about responsibility.
This line: Chloe looked like she was thinking about taking the knife out of Lois’s hand and stabbing her with it and that wasn’t a good sign made me giggle. And the line about Chloe deciding to just smother Lois in her sleep with a pillow made me laugh, too.
SO glad Ollie asked Chloe to go with them. I can't wait for more! Great job, as always!
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Yes, poor Chloe is letting her insecurities get the better of her. :( I'm so glad you're enjoying the JL stuff, all the boys will be back for the next chapter.
I'm happy you enjoyed the Chlo-Lo threats. Haha. That was fun to write.
Thanks for the comments! ♥
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