Look at them being all adorably cute serious haha great pacing in this chapter. I love their back and forth but something about this chapter really did it for me. Can't wait for more. :)
I love you, Lena. I know I say this a lot, but it's the truth. Thank you so much for commenting on this. I'm really happy you're reading it and that you like it. ♥
Wow, am I incredibly in love with this chapter! I really loved the opening scene. It was like episode Beacon, with Chloe lying on/by Oliver's side and gazing at him, but better because Chloe didn't want a laptop over Ollie and Ollie wasn't trying to sneak out. And I loved how shy and conscious Chloe was around Oliver after they moved to go downstairs for breakfast. It was in character for her, and I'm glad she didn't present any energy about regretting her actions with Oliver from the former night. It really helps set the tone for where they are at. =)
I giggled as if I was Chloe when Oliver tossed her the shirt and said he objected to putting clothes on her. I love a primal Oliver, and I love how your Chloe brings that out in Oliver, all around perfectly and so natural from both sides. And I love how you show Oliver's ability to be sexi and domestic without him coming off as a purse-holding-doormat. He made her breakfast, and not only was it sweet and yummy, it was a tender moment, right from her wanting to start the coffee so he
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Awwwwwwwwwwwww. I love you! ♥ It makes me so happy that you're enjoying this so much. Your comments always make me so happy and gooey inside. *squishes you*
Yeah, I'm sorry show, but Chloe is not going to want her computer while she's in bed with Ollie and he's not going to run away. *rolls eyes* Stupid episode...whoops...thanks for saying you liked that part. Primal Oliver is hot and thank you for saying that you enjoyed domestic Oliver. He doesn't have to be a doormat/purse holder. I wish more people would realize that.
Again, you know me too well, but I suppose that comes with us being the same person. ;)
I agree. One of my favorite things about the Chlollie relationship is that they are equals in every way and they understand each other. They don't even have to talk - Justin and Allison do such an amazing job showing their connection with just the looks between them. (Again that moment in Doomsday comes to mind).
Loved it! I loved the conversation between Chloe and Ollie. I can't wait to read the conversation between Chloe and Lois. It ought to be a histerical 'morning after' talk. =P Keep up the great work.
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I giggled as if I was Chloe when Oliver tossed her the shirt and said he objected to putting clothes on her. I love a primal Oliver, and I love how your Chloe brings that out in Oliver, all around perfectly and so natural from both sides. And I love how you show Oliver's ability to be sexi and domestic without him coming off as a purse-holding-doormat. He made her breakfast, and not only was it sweet and yummy, it was a tender moment, right from her wanting to start the coffee so he ( ... )
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Yeah, I'm sorry show, but Chloe is not going to want her computer while she's in bed with Ollie and he's not going to run away. *rolls eyes* Stupid episode...whoops...thanks for saying you liked that part. Primal Oliver is hot and thank you for saying that you enjoyed domestic Oliver. He doesn't have to be a doormat/purse holder. I wish more people would realize that.
Again, you know me too well, but I suppose that comes with us being the same person. ;)
I agree. One of my favorite things about the Chlollie relationship is that they are equals in every way and they understand each other. They don't even have to talk - Justin and Allison do such an amazing job showing their connection with just the looks between them. (Again that moment in Doomsday comes to mind).
Anyway, thanks so much for the comments. I ♥ you.
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