Everybody Loves Me 3/4

[ihearttvsnark]

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[sxymami0909]

*HAPPY SIGH* I have been waiting for this chapter missy and you did not disappoint! Can I just tell you that Lois is awesome??? No really Lois is made of win. She totally punched Jackass Ollie...and then the other Lois was all Hey Farmboy we know you're an alien let us in HAHAHAHAAHAH *dies* I love how you write every single one of these characters. They are so true to who they are on the show and yet they have enough of a tweak that it totally fits with everything you're trying to do.

The way Oliver was talking to the guys...OMG and I literally felt Chloe's pain pooling through the page when she went upstairs...*sniffles* Oh Ollie come back!!! ...*coughs* Sorry...anyhoozer I love Lois and Clark bickering and then Oliver telling Chloe she needed to kick the other Oliver in the ass haha but by far the best line ever...is the last

"Because I know without a doubt that Oliver Queen and Chloe Sullivan belong together in all realities." *swoons* Aint that the truth! I love this story to death! Amazing chapter! :)

[ihearttvsnark]

Awww. ♥ Thank you for waiting patiently. :) It makes me really happy to know that you're enjoying this story so much. It's been really fun to write.

Haha, he earned that punch. Lois doesn't hold back. That's what makes her so awesome. I feel bad for Chloe too. She's trying to hold it together, but it's hard. She spent all that time away from Ollie and now he's gone again and the substitute one is not cutting it.

Glad you liked that last line. It was my favorite too. Thanks, Cori.

[sweet_jesus1]

Wowee where the start!

Poor Chloe - hearing AU Ollie aka Dickhead say them things, especially mentioning the red heads name numerous times. I know she knows it's not him but it doesn't make hearing it hurt any less. How cold he was with her Gosh no words can describe other than bad words lol. This shows through in your writing all the emotion I love it.

Then the guys and AU Ollie - Ouch the some of the things he said - made me wanna hit him. Well at least he knows the truth of them working with Chloe - take that Queen. Tie him up and gag him.

Lois is superb hehe in both realities. Coolest lines ever.

Super sweet with Ollie being concerned for how AU Ollie would treat her and that they can both sense that they're tense. Good Old Lois bringing up the rear and asking why he's so concerned - because they're together <3 LOL

[ihearttvsnark]

Thanks, Chloe! You have no idea how guilty I felt for writing Oliver as being so mean, even though I knew it wasn't Oliver. But it was hard so I'm glad he came across so awful. That's what I was going for.

Hee! It always makes me happy when you like Lois. I have ridiculous love for her.

Of course Ollie is worried about Chloe. He sees how much the people in the AU world despise him and he doesn't want that for her. And then Lois makes it weird...haha.

Thanks so much for the comments! ♥

[jen_am]

[ihearttvsnark]

Aw, thank you! :)

[ms_mojo_risin71]

AWWW...I love this story and am sad that it's ending next chapter :(
Don't have time to leave a proper review..Thanks for the quick update!

“Because I know without a doubt that Oliver Queen and Chloe Sullivan belong together in all realities.” This made me SQUEEE and then hearing spoilers today. Well_________>Flatlined.

Can't wait to read the next chapter! Love it. :)
xoxo
Mellie

[ihearttvsnark]

Thanks for the comments! I'm glad you're enjoying this. Really happy you liked that last line. It's my personal favorite too. And, OMG! Justin and Allison filming together! *happy dance*

[chlavis333]

Awwwwwwwe. I love this. yeah, Chlollie belong together in all realities. This is so good. Lois hilarious in this. I love that Ollie wants Chloe to give this Ollie a chance. Awesome job! Update soon!

[ihearttvsnark]

Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter. And Lois. She's always fun to write.