I loved Oliver revealing himself to Lois and her reserving the right to kick his ass at a later date.
I also really love the way you write Chloe and Lois together, and I couldn't stop laughing when Lois just knew that Chloe had jumped Oliver after he saved her.
I totally agree with your decision not to rewrite the Justice scenes where the team saves them, those are some of the best scenes ever!
I can't wait to read the next chapter and see what happens when Chloe and Oliver have their talk!
Thanks, Brittany! ♥ I'm really glad you enjoyed the chapter. You know as much as I despised the Lollie pairing, I have fun writing Ollie/Lois scenes, especially when they're bantering so I'm happy you liked that. And of course Lois knew Chloe jumped on him. (Seriously, who wouldn't?) Thanks for the support on the Justice thing. I watched the scenes again this morning to double check the dialogue and they're just way too good to mess with. Also, thanks so much for the LJ gift. That was sweet. Your feedback is always awesome too. :)
*sighs happily* This is so perfect. I love how you manage to weave everything from the original episode into it being about Chlollie, especially Ollie's: "This is what I do best" (him saying it to her and not Clark
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Aw, thank you! It makes me so happy that you're still loving this story so much. ♥
Hee! I love that line and Ollie's arrogant smile. He was so badass in that episode...and for once he got to be the hero instead of Clark. Maybe that's why it's one of my faves.
Victor totally has Ollie's back. You're right about Ollie's reasons for revealing himself to Clark and Lois. He's doing it for Chloe because he wants her to see that he's not going to keep anymore secrets. Of course, it might take Chloe awhile to realize that.
Yup, Chloe knows how much Clark loves Lois and how he would do anything for her so she knows him not showing up means he's in trouble. And Chloe doesn't need Clark to save her...she has her knight in shining leather for that. ♥
There is a lot of tension between them and they do need to talk, but there's a solid chance tension relief comes first. *cough*
It's getting hard to hate mondays when I wake up and found out that you and slytherinpunk updated. lol
I love how you rewrited without rewriting Justice, I agree with your author's note, Justice it's just do damn perfect, so I think it makes even more amazing the way you wrote the chapter.
And Lois. <333333 I don't have anyrthing to say besides Lois <33333333. I actually have, I don't know if I said that to you already, but I love the way you write Lois.
I can't wait for the talk between Chloe and Oliver, I hope she forgives him next chapter, I understand her reasons, but look at the man's arms and chest, you can't be angry with him. lol
Awww. I said the same thing to Dawn last night - her updating In Our Hands is the only good thing about Sundays for me.
Justice is so awesome. I love Ollie getting to be the hero and being so badass. I've rewatched those scenes more times than I can count. :)
Aw, yay! I'm glad you love Lois. I have so much fun writing her.
Hmm...now I'm too distracted thinking about Ollie's chest and arms to concentrate on what you're saying...Oh, right. Chloe has forgiven him somewhat, but it's going to be awhile before she really trusts him.
"at last for now..." I like idea that she will find out something to be angry it him, and anyway "kick his ass"-meaning give him pice of her mind ( don't know it i write it right, i don't know wery well english idioms...)
Lois can definitely read Chloe. And I'm not saying Ollie will do something...just that she really hasn't made up her mind yet, but she can't be mad at him after he saved Clark.
Wow what an intense chapter! You had me on the edge of my seat the whole way through. This is the most amazing story and I can't get enough of it...:)))))
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I loved Oliver revealing himself to Lois and her reserving the right to kick his ass at a later date.
I also really love the way you write Chloe and Lois together, and I couldn't stop laughing when Lois just knew that Chloe had jumped Oliver after he saved her.
I totally agree with your decision not to rewrite the Justice scenes where the team saves them, those are some of the best scenes ever!
I can't wait to read the next chapter and see what happens when Chloe and Oliver have their talk!
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Hee! I love that line and Ollie's arrogant smile. He was so badass in that episode...and for once he got to be the hero instead of Clark. Maybe that's why it's one of my faves.
Victor totally has Ollie's back. You're right about Ollie's reasons for revealing himself to Clark and Lois. He's doing it for Chloe because he wants her to see that he's not going to keep anymore secrets. Of course, it might take Chloe awhile to realize that.
Yup, Chloe knows how much Clark loves Lois and how he would do anything for her so she knows him not showing up means he's in trouble. And Chloe doesn't need Clark to save her...she has her knight in shining leather for that. ♥
There is a lot of tension between them and they do need to talk, but there's a solid chance tension relief comes first. *cough*
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I love how you rewrited without rewriting Justice, I agree with your author's note, Justice it's just do damn perfect, so I think it makes even more amazing the way you wrote the chapter.
And Lois. <333333
I don't have anyrthing to say besides Lois <33333333.
I actually have, I don't know if I said that to you already, but I love the way you write Lois.
I can't wait for the talk between Chloe and Oliver, I hope she forgives him next chapter, I understand her reasons, but look at the man's arms and chest, you can't be angry with him. lol
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Justice is so awesome. I love Ollie getting to be the hero and being so badass. I've rewatched those scenes more times than I can count. :)
Aw, yay! I'm glad you love Lois. I have so much fun writing her.
Hmm...now I'm too distracted thinking about Ollie's chest and arms to concentrate on what you're saying...Oh, right. Chloe has forgiven him somewhat, but it's going to be awhile before she really trusts him.
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SO Lois is going decided if she will kick Ollie ass....
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And love they way Lois can "read" Chloe...
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