So I'm all excited for a new chapter... they make up and everything... and then you leave us with a totally mean cliffhanger (I'm not sugarcoating it anymore). Well... ... ... darn it, I'm out of words.
Aw, thanks Sera. I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter and I'm sorry about the cliffhanger. Would it make you feel better if I tell you that parts of the next chapter allign with canon? Think season 6...Justice.
Work with me here, because I have to move backwards through this story as I review, but I have to let you know right now that last scene was so intense, not only was I holding my breath while I read through it, but you definitely spiked up my temperature! Wow, and at the same time my brain is mush.
I love how determined your Oliver is. He's perfectly in character, in love, but not sappy, just sentimental, and resolved. This was the perfect way for Oliver and Chloe to come together again after Oliver's hiccup in not revealing his identity. It was so them, and passionate, and raw and honest. And with all their walls down it really made Chloe see how she affected Oliver, and it was stunning how you made it all crumble before them
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Aw, I love you so much it's borderline ridiculous. ♥
Your comments made me so happy. I love that you feel Ollie is in character because you write him so well so this is like the best compliment ever. I'm so happy you thought their reunion was perfect...but there are still going to be a few bumps.
Aw, yay for bromance! I wish we could have seen more on the show too. I love the scene in Justice where Vic's explaining how Ollie found him on the street and took him in. Bonded for life. :)
*Raises her hand* I agree with everything slytherinpunk said. This is quite possibly my favourite story going on right now. To the point where it's 2:00 AM and I have to be up in four hours, but that didn't stop me from rereading some of the previous chapters to get me in the groove for this new chapter.
Victor, you are a total buzzkill. I know that wasnt his intention but yeah buzz kill.
Chloe should know by now that Oliver meant nothing bad towards her. It was not his intention to hide his secret from him that long. He loves her and he is doing everything to show her how.
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(amazing chapter as always)
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Work with me here, because I have to move backwards through this story as I review, but I have to let you know right now that last scene was so intense, not only was I holding my breath while I read through it, but you definitely spiked up my temperature! Wow, and at the same time my brain is mush.
I love how determined your Oliver is. He's perfectly in character, in love, but not sappy, just sentimental, and resolved. This was the perfect way for Oliver and Chloe to come together again after Oliver's hiccup in not revealing his identity. It was so them, and passionate, and raw and honest. And with all their walls down it really made Chloe see how she affected Oliver, and it was stunning how you made it all crumble before them ( ... )
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Your comments made me so happy. I love that you feel Ollie is in character because you write him so well so this is like the best compliment ever. I'm so happy you thought their reunion was perfect...but there are still going to be a few bumps.
Aw, yay for bromance! I wish we could have seen more on the show too. I love the scene in Justice where Vic's explaining how Ollie found him on the street and took him in. Bonded for life. :)
*hugs you again* Thanks so much for the comments.
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Can't wait for more!!!!! And soon, please!!!
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Chloe should know by now that Oliver meant nothing bad towards her. It was not his intention to hide his secret from him that long. He loves her and he is doing everything to show her how.
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Chloe is starting to see that Oliver cares, but she's still not going to trust him completely. (It's Chloe).
Thanks for the comments.
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And yes yes yes, Olliver scored :D
No words left, brilliant!!
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