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ihanoverian

Driving Emotions (Chapter 2)

Dec 11, 2011 00:24

Here's the second chapter! This one is...let's just say, less eventful. And a little shorter since it's just more of a description chapter. Bleh. Next part will be way more interesting, I promise! I just needed a bridge between the two.

Title: Driving Emotions
Rating: NC-13 (Swearing)
Pairings: Ian Hecox & Anthony Padilla
Genre: Angst
Summary: Ian is ( Read more... )

fan fiction, ian hecox, love, driving emotions, angst, anthony padilla, road trip, emotions, driving

Comments 23

michaelangelo24 December 11 2011, 05:56:58 UTC

That girl was only pointing out what most people notice. ;D

You did a good job of swapping back and forth between the present and flashback. Good job. :)

ihanoverian December 11 2011, 17:47:44 UTC

Thank you! :) I thought I actually failed miserably on that...lol

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ihanoverian December 11 2011, 17:49:24 UTC

OH JEEZ.
Can I just say...your comments MAKE MY DAY.
You had a favorite part of my story? *mind blown*

Thank you so much!
More soon! But I promise, it will be a lot more interesting than this chapter. XD

freshdumbledore December 11 2011, 13:46:57 UTC

I felt a little like I was watching Lost when I read that (there is also a lot of switching between present and past)
Anyway this chapter made MY day because it was just so great, I love stories that last longer until our boys get together and I hope this one will be longer,too :)
I just can't get enough of your writing-style, the words seem to flow and form a perfect image of the scenes.
Awesome work,keep it up!

ihanoverian December 11 2011, 17:50:41 UTC

I've never even watched Lost before (life fail), but I hope by switching between present and past, you mean it's a good thing. D:
But thank you so much! <3

smoshluva December 11 2011, 14:53:18 UTC

K quick and short. I LOVE IT GIME ME MOAR!
kthxbye.

ihanoverian December 11 2011, 17:50:56 UTC

SOONSOONSOON ;D

boredomdelux December 11 2011, 17:56:49 UTC

Man, this was a very intriguing chapter. It's so cool that you are able to write a whole entire chapter where all that happens really is Ian driving a car and thinking while Anthony is sleeping, but still there is so much more to it. The switching between present and flashback flowed so smoothly, and Ian's thoughts were very reasonable and realistic. You have this easy, captivating writing style, which pulls the reader into the story and into the minds of the characters (well, Ian anyways), and THAT is what makes a fic good.

I'm gonna have to stop myself now, as I will be forever speechless by future amazing chapter if I reveal my love for this all in one comment. It's crazy, it's only been two chapters, yet I got so incredibly exciting when I saw you had posted! Can't wait for the next one!

Love, a very VERY devoted reader<3

ihanoverian December 11 2011, 19:34:42 UTC

Oh, wow thank you so, so much!
I'm so flattered! Your comments are always so uplifting and encouraging! ;D
And as I said before, the next chapter will have a lot more plot to it, instead of all these descriptions all the time!

I love my very devoted readers! <3333

boredomdelux December 11 2011, 20:32:13 UTC

You are so very welcome<3
And I hope you didn't think that I thought the "lack" of plot was boring, because it was certainly not! I really like it when a story is able to slow down almost to a halt, and take in the moment completely. But of course, there has to be some sort of plot-development at some point XD But I think you got that covered ;D