No Air

Jun 11, 2010 00:31

Title: No air
Author: onkeyloves 
Pairing: Onew/Key ,Jonghyun included
Genre: Romance, with a mixture of angst and fluff.
Rating: G
Summary: How do we expect Kibum to breathe with no air?

A/N: For our new mod, mumuja ! It’s not exactly fluff, but it’s happy!

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author: onkeyloves, fandom: shinee, rating: g, !fanfiction, pairing: onew/key

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2pmconspiracy June 10 2010, 23:01:53 UTC
YOU JERK. WHERE IS MY SPOT AND OWL UNNIE'S SPOT.

/is angry.

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2pmconspiracy June 11 2010, 06:39:47 UTC
im back and i cant remember how many spots i owe who, so i shall start on our comm -__-

YOUUU. THIS IS NOT FLUFF! rofl, okay the front part wasn't, but the ending was, fine. then mine's considered fluff too!!! rofl. okay whatever, im not making sense. dont blame me, i've been in front of the computer for almost 2 hours trying to write fabricate's fic. it's draining my brain, seriously.

hahahaha i see a rich boy problem story! always the parents -__- but yay this was nice. like the plot and all that~ and call my dumb, but i didnt really get the front part /: like the part where kibum was trying to drown himself. i couldnt figure out which part he like passed out or something >.<" right, i need a brain, now.

and erm, yay, true love prevails...? :D oh wth. my commenting is getting worse and worse. i remembered i sounded more coherent and logical in the past -__- anyways i think i made you angry...? /: /runs.

okay erm, bye~! /flails.

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onkeyloves June 23 2010, 04:36:34 UTC
oops, i made a mistake? HAHHAHAHAHAH. you did come back. sorry.
you got too many spots, i'm confused.

I SAID WITH A MIXTURE OF FLUFF AND ANGSTTTT. it meant BOTH. there's a difference okay! lol, i really took too long to reply here, didn't i /: you already posted that, LOL. and i owe you a comment on that.

lol, yeah. society's just like that. harsh and cruel. fact is, happy endings are rare irl. oh well, life and i's weird way of working.lol, i don't know. everyone got it /: maybe you thought too much. maybe you need a simpler brain /:

lol, well yeah. disney endings ftw (Y) at least this was alittle more coherent =.= it's even more out of the blue these days, really. and no you didn't make me angry. if i were really angry, i wouldn't not appear online and stuff. i would appear and not talk no matter what. so now you know...stop getting me all worked up okay ): there were a few conversations where it went that way /: but you know i still love you ♥ stop over-thinking, alright :D

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juphen June 10 2010, 23:11:37 UTC
yay.....happy together but after a sadness part
i thought it's gonna be angst or someting but no..you made it beautiful

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onkeyloves June 23 2010, 04:37:58 UTC
lol, yeah. i like to write stuff like that (:
teehee, i thought i was gonna separate them too. but thank goodness i didn't.
thank you for your compliment and for commenting and reading ♥
see you around! :D

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volatileflame June 11 2010, 00:21:35 UTC
awwww~ <3
i'm glad they made up : )

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onkeyloves June 23 2010, 04:43:09 UTC
teehee, glad you liked it :D
thank you for reading and commenting! :D

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onkeyloves June 23 2010, 04:46:03 UTC
AWW, thank you :DDD
yeah, writing with song lyrics is really much simpler.

LOL, i thought i was going to kill him too /:
yupp, i wanted to write one on that song since a long time ago. i love the song to bits.
rofl, sadist at work xD
lol, i don't know either. i shall just let the readers decide themselves.
of course i would prefer the oneky.
but jongkey bff-ery is not bad too 8D

rofl, yeah he should have just stayed.
i am happy too xD
cos i managed to not break oneky :D
yeah, sort of.
but it's a blessing in disguise!

teehee ♥♥

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limeblue14 June 11 2010, 03:55:21 UTC
Yayayay angst/fluff~
it was all "NO KEY NO" and then "YES ONKEY YES"
XDDDD
I loved it <3

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onkeyloves June 23 2010, 04:46:37 UTC
ROFL,
that actually made sense. HAHAHHA.
thank you for reading and loving! :D

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