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[ignoreoblivion]

Title: Me and Janey Down by the Schoolyard
Rating: PG-ish? It's pretty damn fluffy
Pairing: cisgirl!John/cisgirl!Sherlock
Word Count: 2300+
Summary: Jane has to babysit Harry and takes him to see Sherlock with her - she also reminisces on how the two of them met.
Notes: Yes, this is kid!fem!lock. I have no regrets. It started out as an exercise for my

Comments

[the_improbable1]

This is so adorable! Little fem!Sherlock is so darling and perfectly, exactly in character. I could picture her, even - curly hair tied back, one knee folded over the other, bent over the book in her lap, foot waving gently in the air (probably conducting some musical thing), occasionally tucking a stray strand of hair behind her ear. Harry sounds exactly like a little brother (quite like my own younger sibling - I feel so sorry for Jane). Jane, to me, didn't particularly seem very feminine - she really felt more like a John than a Jane. You might want to check out some other interpretations of fem!Watson, see how others do it. It's a difficult art, genderbending - the balance between ooc and too like their original gender is a delicate one - and you've done wonderfully with Sherlock here. Jane could use a bit of work, but she seemed like an excellent start! (Watson is more difficult than Holmes - Holmes is rather sexless anyway, and Watson is much more masculine.) All in all, a lovely piece - your writing flows smoothly, the 'verse

[ignoreoblivion]

Wow - thank you so much! Especially, thank you for the advice. I won't necessarily be writing more in this verse, but I will be writing more fem!Lock and Jane, so I'll try to flesh Jane's character out a bit more. I'm glad you liked it overall, and it means a lot that you think I did well with Sherlock. Thank you so much for reading.