Wow. I love the snapshots of memory, the presentness of it. Your repetition of here as both physical and emotional space, how all the "here"s cascade towards the end. Very powerful. Thank you.
Thank you! I'm glad I could convey the presentness of it... I wanted to bring the past to the here and now, to dust off the old memories and give 'em life again. Or something that doesn't sound as corny. ;)
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Just . . . damn, that's good.
I'd give you better feedback, but I can't seem to do it without cursing.
Damn.
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This was wonderful. Raw and touching and HOT!! Loved it!
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Wow. I love the snapshots of memory, the presentness of it. Your repetition of here as both physical and emotional space, how all the "here"s cascade towards the end. Very powerful. Thank you.
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