FIC, Ius Primae Noctis, Arthur/Merlin, NC-17

Aug 20, 2009 20:38

Title: Ius Primae Noctis
Rating: NC-17
Word count: 2,016 words
Summary: In the conquered village of Ealdor, Prince Arthur claims his Lord’s Right to a new bride’s virginity. Merlin convinces Arthur to have him instead.
Warnings: Sort of dub-con at first but then not really, AU, first-time, anal, ass-to-mouth, messy blowjob, bottom!Merlin
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gasmsinc August 21 2009, 02:05:01 UTC
So, I've kind of read all your fics and never commented before, but I really like this.

That is all my brain can form right now \o/

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ifyouweremine August 21 2009, 04:14:42 UTC
Why thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it! ^___^ <333

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eosrose August 21 2009, 02:26:51 UTC
In the morning, Arthur leaves. He takes Merlin with him.

The ending kinda made my life. ^_^
I love how you went from dub-con to oh-yes-please-hot and then proceeded to turn me into a gibbering pile of mush. &heart;

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ifyouweremine August 21 2009, 04:23:48 UTC
Yay, thank you!

I was going to make it straight-up dubcon but Arthur was, like, "What the hell, I wasn't actually going to do it! I had to put on a show for the others, you know how it is," and Merlin was nodding and saying, "He's a good man, really--" ("and dashing and heroic and brave" Arthur added; "yes, that too," Merlin told him, fond) "and I know he'd never do that to anybody," continued Merlin, so I was, like, "FINE, THEN. You schmoopy pair of SCHMOOPERS. Have your fluff if you wish it," and then Arthur was, like, "Listen, to make you feel better, I'm willing to take one for the team and fuck Merlin in the mouth as well. My motives are purely philanthropic, I assure you," and I was, like, "...Okay," and Merlin was, like, "Wait, what?"

LOL, so, yes, THANKS AGAIN! #smishes#

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xancredible August 21 2009, 08:39:19 UTC
lollollol Somehow I can totally picture them in your head arguing like that ...

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rubena August 21 2009, 16:47:51 UTC
*cackle*

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spidermoth August 21 2009, 03:29:43 UTC
OH, Holy Mother! That was positively filthy! From arsehole to mouth in under 7 seconds!

I'd take Merlin with me too. :D

Brilliant characterizations, and fantastic first meeting/first time. I loved every part of this.

...and I think my panties are ruined...

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spidermoth August 21 2009, 04:05:11 UTC
Is it pervy that I had to read it again? *blinks*

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ifyouweremine August 21 2009, 04:48:09 UTC
Why thank you!

Re: panty problem: well the logical solution is to go without them next time, no? LMAO! (Sorry, I'm a bit sleep-deprived at the moment and I thought that joke was clever, but undoubtedly I will see this later and say, "Self, why? Why do you harass your readers?" ^___~)

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aeroport_art August 21 2009, 05:09:38 UTC
Hotness. I love what you do with come--as in, you throw it around and it gets every-fucking-where and hot damn, it DOES THINGS TO ME.

Was there ever any doubt that I'd rec this?

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ifyouweremine August 21 2009, 05:23:50 UTC
Why thanks so much, darling, I'm so pleased you liked it! And thanks so much for the rec, as well! #glomps#

Re: come: OMG LOL, I used to be so prim in my ficporn, believe it or not, and then somewhere along the way I was, like, "Come? Hell yeah! Spurted across faces, running sticky down thighs, licked and licked from somebody's mouth? BRING IT." WHAT HAPPENED =oO ^___~

Also, wow, I've been pretty productive, Merlin fic-wise, this week--this one came and slapped me across the face, and I've got, like, three from the pornathon that I'm posting on Sunday, possibly more, so, WTF. But the one Merlin fic I should be writing (the reel_merlin one) has just gotten started and it's turning out all plotty and G-rated and generally not what I usually do at all. I HOPE I CAN FINISH #WOEFACE#

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ifyouweremine August 21 2009, 05:24:53 UTC
Why thank you!

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