[FIC] PoT: I Can't Stop Loving You 4: We Make Mistakes (past Atobe/Tezuka, eventual Atobe/Oshitari)

[iff_u_loved_me]

Title: I Can’t Stop Loving You 4 (We Make Mistakes)

Author:  iff_u_loved_me

Genre: The Prince of Tennis

Pairing: past Atobe/Tezuka,  Atobe/Oshitari , one-sided Atobe/Jiroh

Rating: PG

Warning(s): slight angst

Disclaimer: Belongs to Takeshi Konomi

Summary: Atobe is reflective and Jiroh offers his guidance.

Word Count: 1686

a/n: I think I’m going to make

Comments

[zhe01]

A sentence in here had a missing word... now if only I cana remember the sentence... or the word... x_x

So Jiro is in the picture more now. Have Gakuto and Oshitari done anything? Have...

Hm. You're mean.

[iff_u_loved_me]

I think I got it ^__^ hey, at least I updated ne? and all your questions mean your interested XDDD

[zhe01]

Yes... definitely interested. *slump on chair next to desk* So... when's the next one? *twidles fingers*

[zhe01]

There: “But you didn’t find him, you fell in love with you did find instead,” Jiroh plows on. It’s his turn to be dismissive.

the word what is missing.... I think..... *stuffs head back in pillow with a v sign* :P

[zhe01]

"But you're wrong"

I was wrong? ....... wasn't it Jiro who said it before?

*restuffs*

[zhe01]

"Let me there for you, t"
be?

sorry for commen spammage... >.<

"indefinable "
unidentifiable?

And that: “It’ll be okay, Keigo. We all make mistakes,” he whispers. Coming from a sweet boy, so sweetly deceptive.

has got to be my favorite part. *pockets Jiro for later use*

[iff_u_loved_me]

no I'm glad ^___^ it shows you care XDD

[reader_a]

“It’ll be okay, Keigo. We all make mistakes,”
-wonderful! ^^

[iff_u_loved_me]

thank you! ^__^

[dame_batsie]

Nice fic (read the other three parts). I'd like to see Atobe make more "mistakes." :P

Need more, please.

[iff_u_loved_me]

lol thanks ^__^ 5 and 6 are up - they're just f-locked so..I don't feel like unlocking them..so...*friends you*