Oh, you wanted porn?

[if_in_solitude]

Title: Set the World on Fire
Pairing: H/D
Word Count: 1804
Rating: NC-17
Disclaimer: The characters belong to Rowling; the prompt belongs to

Comments

[potion_lady]

As hot and lovely as the porn is in this, I can honestly say that there was some absolutely gorgeous imagery that caught my eye even more than the hot and beautiful boys did.

the condensation left tracks like tears on the dark wood That leaves such a vivid picture in my mind. Wonderful.

The kiss tasted of desperation, of a hundred nights of solitude, of old sorrow and new hope. It tasted like a memory of all the ones before and a promise for all the ones after. This is so exquisite I can nearly taste it myself. Stunning.

Absolutely fantastic.

[if_in_solitude]

Mmm. Thank you.

I appreciate that, especially as I often worry that my descriptions are tilting towards the overdramatic. So I'm glad to know it worked for you.

*hugs*

[charmed310]

*is so pleased*

Love it!

[if_in_solitude]

Thank you. *g*

[sesheta_66]

That was wonderful. The desperation gradually wearing away Harry's hope until he's lost almost all, but he still carries on searching.

Beautiful.

And of course, the sex was very hot. Yum. *fans self*

[if_in_solitude]

Thanks. Yeah, when he's looking for Draco, Harry can't stop. Either that or I can't let him stop. *g*

I'm glad the sex worked for you. The stuff I write myself doesn't turn me on (I have no idea why), so I have a hard time telling how hot it is.

[softly_sweetly]

Oh my word! Yes, the porn was lovely (really, really lovely...) but the whole thing. I completely second potion_lady - the imagery was beautiful.

*happy sighs*

*loves you*

[if_in_solitude]

Yeah, thank you. I love imagery, it's my favorite thing to write.

*loves you back*

[if_in_solitude]

Oops. Meant to write Yay! not yeah.

[idontgiveafaux]

this. is. BRILLIANT. oh, i felt so sorry for harry at the beginning. i thought he was never going to find draco, but then he did! and then things really started heating up! like someone else said earlier, the porn part was hot, but i really enjoyed the first half of the story purely for reading your descriptions!x

[if_in_solitude]

Thank you so much! I was in a very ansty mood when I wrote it, and I guess it showed. But in a good way, I guess.

I'm glad you liked both aspects of it!