Divergence

[idraax]

Read this bit first please.
Another meme de-annon.
Request this is based off of:  Italy/Germany - Rape Recovery and Hurt/Comfort
Notes: This didn't fit the request because I think I left it open ended enough for interpretation, but I guess the warning could be the title of the request. Give me suggestions on how to improve please! This is currently a

Comments

[charlzway]

Ahh! So you're the one who wrote Divergence!

I still like this piece as much as when I read it off the kinkmeme and I think you captured Italy's fear and his shame of his own cowardice pretty well. As I've said, I really liked how you opened the fill with the "timeline" phrase - it's a good way to pull a reader into the story because it foreshadows something happening and I also like the idea of Italy conversing with his older!self.

And the ending was also very sweet, that he finally ran back, despite his overwhelming fear, and I loved how you closed the fill with references to the "timeline" again.

Nicely done! :)

[idraax]

Thank you! You've made my night! I'm glad you liked it! :)

[hoshiko_2000]

T-T.

[idraax]

Er...sorry?

[hoshiko_2000]

It was a good kind of sad XD I liked this :). Very well written.

[idraax]

I'm glad. :)

[azurecerulean]

♥ Impressive description of pain ♥

[idraax]

Thank you. :)