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idontlikegravy

HL50 prompt - Watcher

Aug 13, 2007 19:14

This is unbetaed so any and all comments gratefully received. It's a CSI/Highlander crossover, and my first CSI fic so I would really appreciate the feedback. Written for the
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richie, crossover, challenge, hl50, csi, highlander

Comments 15

sharpiesgal August 13 2007, 19:23:45 UTC

That was very interesting and I can easily see Grissom as a Watcher.

Nice job.

idontlikegravy August 13 2007, 20:24:33 UTC

Thank you :)

nice tigerlily0 August 13 2007, 20:20:12 UTC

I agree with the previous comment. Grissom would make an awesome Watcher.

Cool story.

Re: nice idontlikegravy August 13 2007, 20:25:34 UTC

He would wouldn't he? Thanks for commenting. :)

carolhelga August 13 2007, 23:09:29 UTC

Darn, now I've got Grissom as Watcher in my head, and that doesn't fit with my CSI/HL cross. LOL

I'll have to pretend I didn't read this to finish up mine... Great stuff, though. I like Grissom meeting Richie on the rollercoaster. Perfect!

idontlikegravy August 14 2007, 17:11:18 UTC

I hate when stuff like that happens to me so sorry. I'm having to avoid the rest of jinxed_wood's excellent Blue Sun Rising in case I accidently steal any ideas for my FF cross. *g*

Talking of your fic, any more appearing soon? *bats eyelashes*

Glad you enjoyed. *bounces*

carolhelga August 15 2007, 00:11:43 UTC

Talking of your fic, any more appearing soon? *bats eyelashes*

I'm almost ready to post...probably this weekend.

strangevisitor7 August 15 2007, 04:08:12 UTC

I agree as well - I love the idea of Grissom as a watcher. I really like Richie. There need to be more Richie fics.
“Aw crap, not again,” he muttered as he slipped into unconsciousness. I love it how Immortals are always annoyed when they die. It cracks me up.

Also, if you need a beta just ask.

idontlikegravy August 16 2007, 13:57:24 UTC

There need to be more Richie fics
No argument from me on that front, there should definitely be more.

Thanks for the offer to beta, I'll keep it in mind :)

holde_maid August 15 2007, 15:22:57 UTC

It's so Richie to go and get himself shot like that. *g*

idontlikegravy August 16 2007, 13:58:24 UTC

Isn't is though? He tries so hard, but it never quite works out for him. I think it's part of the reason I love him so much. :)

holde_maid August 16 2007, 16:28:36 UTC

In that respect he reminds me of an acquaintance of ours. If it weren't for the bad upbringing, she'd have been a nice, industrious person with a good life. But just a few factors being off, her life's rather a mess, and she has no Duncan to teach her the lessons she missed earlier in life.

idontlikegravy August 17 2007, 18:02:14 UTC

I think we all know someone a bit like that.