A Now Convenient Curse

[idle_curiosity]

Characters: Almost all, written about or alluded to

Comments

[ningloreth]

That's brilliant! You've turned it... completely inside out and shown its dark insides!

It's sharp and cogent as it is, but there's also enough plot to make a multi-part story ;-)

[idle_curiosity]

Thanks so much for letting me know your thoughts.

This is, without a doubt, the darkest thing I've done. It's chilling to think about how things could have ended should Will have kept his place and not gone to Jack to find out where Elizabeth might be.

I like the way you put it ... turning it inside out to show the dark insides. Brr.

Thanks again.

[pearlseed]

Clever piratista you are...real scary and awful, darkness that I can barely imagine, but well writ. Well done.