FIC: Asparagus (HIMYM)

Apr 18, 2011 12:18

Title: Asparagus
Summary: Ted and Marshall make a discovery.
Rating/Warnings: PG-13. 
Word Count: 366
Challenge: barneyrobin comm Fanworks round 1
Fandom/Pairing: HIMYM, Gen
Spoilers: For Season 6 - Legendaddy

Barney jumped and slammed down the lid of Ted’s laptop with guilt written all over his face... )

chara: marshall, himym, chara: ted, chara: barney

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snogged April 18 2011, 12:22:25 UTC
This is cute, hun.

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idioticonion April 18 2011, 21:18:11 UTC
Thanks! :-)

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yogurtpo3 April 18 2011, 12:50:35 UTC
Aww, this was soooooo cute! And I hope Marshall and Ted gave him lots of bro!hugs for that to make up for it! :)

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idioticonion April 18 2011, 21:20:21 UTC
They really do! Barney gets bullied by the others occasionally, and they never seem sorry for it! So I was determined to show an instance where they realise they've pushed Barney a bit too far. :-)

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idioticonion April 18 2011, 21:21:23 UTC
They really do! Poor old Barney is often bullied by the others and they never usually seem to realise they're doing it. Right now, Barney needs a lot of drinks and hugs.

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novemberrain007 April 18 2011, 22:45:45 UTC
Awww, Barney!

What a sweet story! I loved Ted and Marshall understanding Barney at the end, too.

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idioticonion April 19 2011, 09:37:06 UTC
Thanks honey! I think they need some serioius bro-hugs. But then, the gang were incredibly supportive of Barney in Hopeless, so...

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secondmezzanine April 20 2011, 00:14:12 UTC
I'm a total sucker for anything to do with Jerry. This was such an adorable idea. And now I want to order that novel on Amazon meself.

Also, you just have Barney's voice so down (not that that's surprising!).

“You’re ready in less than an hour. That’s gotta be a record.” He paused, then elaborated, “Because you’re a girl.”

“That’s my private personal business!” Barney shrieked.

And then how he defeatedly repeats it later... LOL. It's just so Barney.

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idioticonion April 20 2011, 14:50:19 UTC
Aw, thanks honey. I thought I'd totally lost my Barney voice! I can't hear him in my head any more. But it just needs some practice! :-)

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secondmezzanine April 20 2011, 16:31:15 UTC
No no no! You've definitely still got it.

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