FIC: Where the bad things are (2/?) HIMYM AU (Changed!Verse)

[idioticonion]

Part 2

Ted raced down the stairwell of the deserted police station. Barney wasn't far behind him, making the occasional grumble of complaint about the narrowness of the corridors and the number of feathers he'd lost during this mission so far. The place was shrouded in semi-darkness lit by tiny emergency lights at floor level. The

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[idioticonion]

Oh good! That was definitely my intention. I'm glad you like it.

[idioticonion]

I'd definitely live in the First Change. But yeah, Second Change? Not so much. :-)

[bishojo_kitsune]

Whoa.

Haha, oh Ted and Barney, the world is going to ruin and they still want to play action hero. That's the Ted and Barney we love.

Marshall. Marshall. Marshall?! What happened to him? Just when you think it's bad that he transformed into a monster here he is like 10x worse! What happened!? You can't leave it hanging there!

[idioticonion]

Thank you! And exactly. It's only going to get more scary in the next part. I've got parts 1-4 written right now so there's plenty to post. Yay!

[bishojo_kitsune]

Yay!
Of course the other question that just bugs me the most is, Where's Robin? (And, do I really want to know? lol)

[idioticonion]

Robin has a major part in this story. But I'm not saying any more.

:-)

[otempora42]

Oooh. Totally not what I expected, but I like it! Post more. (Like, now.)

[idioticonion]

Thank you! I'm wondering now what you did expect.

I've got parts 3 and 4 written and I might post them tonight. I'll see how it goes.

[smthwallflower]

Marshall!! It's Marshall!! Oh noooes :( Sooooo glad you continued this, it's amazing. I love it to bits and pieces.

I loved >> And at least the bad guys hadn't set up base in New Jersey. << Oh Ted and his hating on the NJ. I wanna give Lily a hug and I love Ted/Barney the stealth mission team. For a second I though Lily and Barney had serious potential for getting together, but then it was Marshall and... maybe there's still a chance? :P

Just one thing,
>> his hand coming away with on dirty feather. <<

Is it supposed to be 'one dirty feather'?

[idioticonion]

Thank you! That's very kind of you. And all pairings are up for grabs right now. :-)

Thanks for the editorial spot. My English is for shit today.

[bananacosmic]

Ooooh, you've got me on the edge of my seat here! I too thought they were outside Lily's cell. Poor everyone involved *hugs them* This is cool ^^

[idioticonion]

A-ha! I'm glad you fell for the old "rescue is outside the door, no it's not!" trope! :-)

The next part is up.