*pain*

Apr 22, 2009 18:01

I am doing line-edits on Aolon.
On the opening of the first volume, to be exact.
Which has a syntax of the comparative fluidity and clarity of oak planks. My effort to create something better resembles sawing said plank with a butter knife.

Not impossible, no. More hopeful still if I have exaggerated slightly, and the butter knife is actual a steel ( Read more... )

edits, whinges, aolon: vol5, love war books, aolon

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jeanhuets April 23 2009, 00:44:27 UTC
That picture really hits home. I looked like that this morning. "D

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