Comments | ideal_girl: SG:A: Between This and That (John/Teyla, AU, PG)

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SG:A: Between This and That (John/Teyla, AU, PG)

Nov 21, 2006 16:43

Title: Between This and That
Author: ideal_girl
Rating: PG
Characters/Keywords: John/Teyla, AU, UST
Word count: 1700, 17 100-word sections
Disclaimer: Belongs to the fanboys up North.

Written for the john_teyla_fic challenge, for irony_rocks, who wanted something "The Real World"-related with Teyla attacked by the nanites instead of Elizabeth, describing her coma world and John's ( Read more... )

Comments 19

purple_cube November 21 2006, 22:24:02 UTC

What I great story! Loved all of it, but especially the end - it's just so them. Thanks :)

ideal_girl November 27 2006, 13:18:38 UTC

Thanks so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

madjm November 27 2006, 05:28:07 UTC

What a nice story! I had seen the story prompt, and I was kind of glad I didn't get it, since it would be hard to do it justice. But I think you did a great job. I loved that you brought Charin back, especially. Thanks for writing!

ideal_girl November 27 2006, 13:19:21 UTC

Yeah, the prompt was worrying me! ;) Thanks for your kind words.

loveconquers14 November 30 2006, 02:24:51 UTC

This is absolutely beautiful! Thank you so much for writing and sharing! You are quite talented! :)

ideal_girl November 30 2006, 02:39:19 UTC

Thank you so much, you are too kind.

tielan December 3 2006, 06:55:56 UTC

This is amazing. I thought about writing a version of The Real World that dealt with the fact that Teyla has Wraith DNA and the Asurans never even noticed, and you've done it better than I could. (Mine would have been long and convoluted.)

It's great! Thank you! (Even though you didn't write it for me.)

ideal_girl December 4 2006, 14:46:14 UTC

(Mine would have been long and convoluted.)

Oh, darling, it was going that way for me, as well, but then I was like, "You know what? The Martins ignore a bunch of stuff most of the time, so I'm gonna, too." Plus, forcing myself to do a Teyla POV really made it sparse, and helped me tone it down.

Thanks so much for your kind words -- you're definitely one of those folks who writes a great Teyla piece, so I'm flattered you enjoyed my attempt!

the_groke December 14 2006, 23:16:50 UTC

I first read your story few weeks ago and while I was mulling over how to express my great appreciation, I lost the link to it. Thankfully allong came tielan with recs and here I am again : ) I still don't know what to say but I loved it. I'm not good at smart feedback I just want to squish them together, and squish the fic to my bosom and draw hearts
♥

ideal_girl December 23 2006, 13:55:09 UTC

Oh, wow, thank you so much! Sorry it has taken me so long to respond to your lovely comment -- it is much appreciated, though.