Fanfiction: Liar Game -- Rite of Spring, The Days After

[dagas_isa]

Title: Rite of Spring, The Days After
Fandom: Liar Game
Characters: Nao, Akiyama
Rating: T
Summary: Nao finds a strangely familiar boy, and she and Akiyama discover a connection in their past that goes much deeper than they originally thought.
Notes: Part 5 of 5. This is mostly pointless fluff, so meh. =P Read 1,  2, 3, & 4.

Comments

[mi_tsu_ki]

Thank you so much! This was so sweet (TwT)

I think it was a good idea not to include kissing and giving this part of the fanfiction this ending. It gives a feeling that would mostly be forgotten otherwise (I'm not sure you'll understand what I mean, but I don't know how to explain this in english >_<;)

[dagas_isa]

I think I can understand a little bit what you're trying to get at.

Hopefully it conveyed a sense that 1)they still have a nice big future ahead of them beyond the story and 2) they intend face that future together.

You're more than welcome to explain in Spanish. I studied it some, so I might be able to (hopefully) understand what you were saying. ^^;;

[mi_tsu_ki]

I shouldn't explain things in Spanish; I have to face the terribly hard First Certificate exam and I will only go to english classes to prepare it three months (>_<;

Anyways...
Lo que quería decir es que, si en vez de acabar este capítulo así hubieras hecho (adicionalmente) que Akiyama y Nao se besaran o qualquier otra cosa por el estilo el sentimiento de esa última acción hubiera dejado a el de "estar juntos para siempre" en un segundo plano, o almenos le hubiera quitado algo de importancia. Por eso me alegro que se acabara así, es más dulce; algo así como el amor platónico, que no es un amor no correspondido como se cree popularmente (almenos en mi país), sinó el amar el alma de la persona (Lo defino como lo que es la persona en sí, lo que piensa, sus acciones...; no como una substancia metafísica, puesto que no creo en esa última cosa)

I don't think I have explained it well, sorry (>_<)

[dagas_isa]

No that was a very good explanation. I'm really glad that sentiment was conveyed because it really characterizes the core of their relationship. ^^