The criteria to which the producers must adhere include commitments to: democratic organisation; sustainability (economically, environmentally and socially) of production; improved working conditions; job creation and investment in their wider communities.
* no comma after adhere ( I think you can just use commas after the colon. You generally use a semicolon when the list is more complicated (i.e. has a subclause within one of the items that needs commas round it).
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* no comma after adhere
( I think you can just use commas after the colon. You generally use a semicolon when the list is more complicated (i.e. has a subclause within one of the items that needs commas round it).
But either probably works.
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I'd actually use a bullet pointed list, but I presume that isn't allowed.
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