IchiRuki 100 Themes: 27, dancing in the rain, pt. 2

[tenebris]

Title: Eyes Open (pt. 2)
Author: Ninx
Warning: This part? NC-17, yo.
Notes: Happy 2006, have some smut! Featuring angst, chatting, Ichigo's lack of vocabulary, Rukia's education, and the cheesiest Ichigo line EVAH allowed by two amazing betas. (Seriously. Year's worth of cheese, right there.)

Comments

[zelel]

DUDE. O________O

Despite the fact that this is smut, I totally laughed my way through it. XDXD Really, really enjoyable! And I totally commend you on writing first-time!sex! God knows I would never try to attempt it with all its awkwardness. :p

LOVELY, LOVELY JOB~~~!!!! *GLOMPSYOU*

[tenebris]

*g* Thank you thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it, as Lord knows we worked it to death. :)

And yay! First-time IchiRuki sex strikes me as something that needs humor. A ton of humor. WOO it worked! (Though, as I told Ray, everytime I write something intended-to-be-like-a-canon-relationship for them, another crack!AU is spawned where I can make them have TEH SEX as if they know what they're doing. *g*)

*hugs back* Thank you! And thank you for encouraging me, too!

[mparf]

“This is...it?”
aah, a shattering blow to ichigos male pride; i love it!

[tenebris]

*snickers* One of my favorite lines, yes. And thank you!

Also, your icon is faboo. I keep watching it for awhile...

[sari_15]

And oh how I love you right now...

Seriously...brownie points for this line...

His metaphor fails him at that point, because Rukia has just shifted closer to him, in the process making a noise that fries his brain entirely.

Loved the whole thing--laughed through the whole way through. Abosolutely beautiful! Thanks!

[tenebris]

Aww, thank you!

And HEE. Writing Ichigo in this bit was really interesting, and I went at it entirely freeform. And so you get things like that. I'm glad it actually worked, too. Thanks again!

*stares at icon for awhile* I've always liked that one. :)

[fairywine]

YES! They finally stopped acting so block-headed and got around to doing what we all wanted them to do.And about time,I say.Great job,as usual.I can't wait for more.^___^

[tenebris]

HEE! Thank you!

[tokyofish]

OMG. XDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD Hands down, best first time IchiRuki sex EVAH. Yes. They are awkward and snarky and sexy and oh lord, top of her class, popsicles, reciprocation, and idiocy! <333333333333 WHAT IS NOT TO LOVE?! (And, HAHA, I'm glad I'm not the only one who thought of inappropriate uses for the Way of Binding. ^___^)

And, um, I'm, uh, kinda glad Anti-Ichi got to share in the *coughcough* benefits. ^^; (He is such a 'shipper, poor lonely Hollow. Or maybe he's just interested in gettin' some lovin' the only way he can? XD Hmmm.)

I know I've said this 24927394872398473285243 times before, and I most likely will again, but you know I love you (and your Muse), right, hon? You two do good work. ^___~

[tokyofish]

I forgot. "Rukia...I'm here to save you." *DIES* LOVELOVELOVE.

P.S. Your "jealousy"s have some sneaky extra "l"s in 'em before the ys. ^^;

[tenebris]

That is. the most cheesy. worst. line. ever. :) I should be shot for even incorporating it (and the Ichigo!Muse snickers) but you know, had to reference the SS arc somehow...;)

And thank you! Somehow we all missed that. It's fixed, woo!

[tokyofish]

But I LOVE IT FOR THE CHEESE. I mean, if I hadn't been reading it during the wee hours of the morning (as in, sleeping parents), that totally deserved a howl outloud. XDXD As it was, I had to internalize it. ^^; And you know I love your cheese when you see fit to use it for good (aka evil). Golden power of DiC? ;)

Anyway, it's such an out-of-place yet appropriate line. I'm sure they both would've gone WTH if he hadn't, uh, immediately distracted them. Yes. But later (in bed), I bet she mocks him for it. And meanwhile, it amuses, it really does. XDXD

I am sneaky typo ninja. I find typos and slay them stealthily. Unfortunately, am slain by own in turn. So it goes.