[exo] if you're with me (then everything's alright)

Apr 27, 2015 13:39

title: if you're with me (then everything's alright)
pairing: Luhan/Xiumin
word count: 5000w
rating: pg13
summary: Minseok is sleeping beauty and Luhan isn't close to being a prince.
warnings (more like spoiler): [dont click me pls.]character death. dun dun DUN also, did not beta this.
a/n: this definitely isn't what i expected when i planned this out. it was supposed ( Read more... )

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incipientgrowth April 27 2015, 07:13:34 UTC
was hoping for that k-drama cliche to come rolling in tbh

i am really sad like seriously :(

but i feel so bad for jongdae omg

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baekmebacon April 27 2015, 10:29:54 UTC
imagine Minseok waking up from his coma and sees Luhan in full color and he's like WOAH, WHY ARE YOU IN COLOR. Where is the gray? and then luhan looks at him weirdly, you can see colors? and they stupidly think there's a flaw in the system and they're actually soul mates or something.

and then jongdae comes in like a wreckingball and makes lulu twitchy and minseok spends time with him and luhan grumbles bcs he's a bit jealous bcs jongdae is sweet and shy and minseok sees him like a brother too, just like luhan to sehun and yeah. but somehow minseok still dies. and the scene where jongdae drops a gray apple comes into play. (it would still be sad.)

thank you for reading and commenting~ it means a lot uwu

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incipientgrowth April 28 2015, 13:05:36 UTC
but lu han and minseok are soulmates excuse me no jk

okay i take it back thank god u didn't put that k-drama cliche bc it would've been a lot sadder and nope, and you know, cliche

ugh jongdae tho. like ok lu han i feel bad for u but my heart shatters for jongdae even though lu han is the one who suffered the more
and of course we can't forget sehun who kinda just wants to be a good friend while lu han pretty much just uses him idk
is my bias showing i'm sorry

this au and fic is wonderful seriously <3

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daylighreverie April 27 2015, 08:54:19 UTC

I'm just really sad everything is really sad. But I love it that it's realistic, there's no miracle thing and magical plot twist. Good job ^^b

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baekmebacon April 27 2015, 10:31:50 UTC
(plot twist everyone is dead and luhan is just dreaming everything up. loljk)

we all can't have happily ever afters uwu. maybe next time? kkkkk

thank you for reading bb!

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charliebnim April 27 2015, 10:42:14 UTC
I feel so sad for jongdae and for sehun tho... Luhan too but gawd jongdae just ended up alone ....

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baekmebacon April 27 2015, 13:58:25 UTC
jongdae has me. dont worry! >:3

thank you for reading~ it's been a while btw!

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itrainsallnight April 27 2015, 14:22:43 UTC
Nooooo, give me the k-drama cliche ( ... )

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baekmebacon April 27 2015, 14:47:45 UTC
/wipes your tears and snot/ oh gosh, im sorry.

Luhan only came to him when he couldn't handle it himself anymore, and then leave as soon after showing his lowest point.

some people do this to their friends, and i thought it would be a great idea to portray luhan as such. he's a great person tbh, he's nice and charming too, but to what extent? because he's human, ig maybe he could show his dark side? uwu despite his shitty-ness as a friend and a hyung to sehun, the kid still forgives him. they're both in the wrong anyway (sehun assuming more than they've agreed on and luhan for using sehun as tear wiper)

I'm glad that nobody blame Jongdae for Minseok's accident.

it might be just me but, i think luhan wouldnt blame him because it was minseok's choice to save jongdae, and blaming would be unproductive and it wouldn't bring minseok back now, would it?

uwu oh gosh, thank you for your long and thought out comment ^___^ i really appreciate you reading and liking this! i think im tearing up too TT TT

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queenseok April 27 2015, 14:51:57 UTC
um tounge in a lungs

I really loved greyscale and it made me cry but honestly i didn't cry for this one but instead i feel empty and kinda broken.

I just want to hug (you) Luhan for all the sacrifices just for minseok even stopping his education and work his ass off. Ending his life support is /supposedly/ for the good, it would make lu's suffering shorter and there will be more time for him to move on, although kjd would lose his colors nevertheless he i assume he does not feel that much connection or smth for ms since they never really talked about it. BUT if ms would regain his consciousness, lu would still be heartbroken if ms would choose kjd.

Thank you so much for creating such a wonderful au, i've been supporting for this au since the first day. Good luck to everything <33

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baekmebacon April 27 2015, 15:42:17 UTC
jongdae could have gotten attached to minseok if luhan supplied him with answers, but at the same time it would be the kind of fond attachment like brotherly love and respect? (bcs minseok saved him) so you're right. hahahah.

but lbr, minseok wouldn't choose jongdae. sure, colors might be a great phenomenon, but luhan. and as stated in previous fics, soul mates aren't just romantic connections. :D

let me hug YOU, thank you so much for leaving a comment and reading this. most importantly for supporting this au, and being patient. ;;;; /cries
thank you.

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