[Multi-chapter] My Long Way to Marry You (1/?)

[icha_kazeinda]

Hellooooo world!!! I'm back!!! xDDD
gooosshh~!! it's been long time since I lasted posting here.. Yeah,,I know I should continue my story about Yama if you guys still remember about it xDDD but for this moment I will post another fic.. Well, this is my first time to collaborate in making a fic so  I can't wait to post it no matter what.. xDD This

Comments

[aka_caster]

just woke up this morning and found this. hahaha.. saving my first place for commenting. Love you :-*

[icha_kazeinda]

ohayou~ ^^
hahaha.. love you too sis.. *hugs* <3

[yun_miyake]

Icha, as what I promised, I read your story :))

you're doing good,,I like the plot
but you should be careful with grammars and typos (just like I did also)
and keep your story in good pace.

Don't be rush to tell something, it will be more beautiful if you explain first about how your characters look like (I mean, we all know Arashi, but in this story, they aren't arashi)

Try to put explanations between dialogues, so your story will be long enough, I hope you can update next chapter soon, Sakuraiba is not my favorite pairing but I think it's okay to read it hahaha

ganbare!!
I support you *wusssshhh!!!

[icha_kazeinda]

senpaaaaaiii~ thanks a lot for your comment and suggestion.. :))
we will try to put the idea in the next chapter.. :D
thank you so much for your time to read it eventhough you prefer Juntoshi.. hehehe.. xP

[yun_miyake]

ganbare!!
I'm really happy that you had started writing, you should have done it earlier ichaaa
and your yama series should have a continuation :))

[icha_kazeinda]

hehehe.. well,,sometimes the problem is about time,,and sometimes about my mood.. xDD *kicked*
I will senpai.. after Sakuraiba ended,,I will continue my first Yama fic.. :))

nice story

[feuerfliege_x]

I wait for chapter 3 :)