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iceshade

Better Than Alien Liquor (version one)

Jan 03, 2010 02:42

Better Than Alien Liquor

WARNING! Spoilers for the end of DW The End of Time part two
Rating: R for heavily implied sexing (sorry, no actual smut)
Disclaimer: Doctor Who and Torchwood are both RTD and the BBC’s not mine. Both would have ended differently if they were
word count: 1255 (version one)
(un-spoilery) summary: a certain scene in the most ( Read more... )

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Comments 32

jantoforever21 January 3 2010, 08:08:45 UTC

That was just wonderful! I was, as well, very very angry at that scene (and I have written my version of that scene (which, including both of yours, even thought you haven't posted the second, are much better than the original scene).

Holy crap! Is that John Barrowman in the dress!

iceshade January 3 2010, 08:24:09 UTC

wow, fast reply XD thank you though!
I was-- not happy with that scene to say the least... I actually liked the episode (I cried, but I liked it) they showed that mickey and martha were married. D: and as awesome as freema's hair was, it all went downhill from there.
I intend to make a post of my thoughts at some point tomorrow once I've finished and edited part two (sleeeeeeep... gaaaaaahsdfhjkl...)

yep, it's a pic of him from his run in la cage aux folles (I didn't take it or make the icon though) :D

kholran January 3 2010, 08:57:11 UTC

That scene was like a punch in the gut. So thank you for this. THIS is how it should have been. And I think I'll stop there before I degenerate into foul language and gestures XD

iceshade January 7 2010, 04:34:32 UTC

you're welcome, and it's okay, I started yelling at the screen myself

missthingsplace January 3 2010, 09:11:12 UTC

I think that scene pissed a huge amount of people off ... i like this version lots and i can't wait to see the other one.

iceshade January 7 2010, 04:35:55 UTC

thank you :)
my computer broke (or something) the other day, so I can't finish/post it yet, but I hope to have it up as soon as I can

mv_girl January 3 2010, 09:29:54 UTC

Ohhhh, that is very lovely. Yes, that's the way it could and should have been resolved. Would have been so easy to make everyone happy!!!!
You made me happy. Thank you!

iceshade January 7 2010, 04:37:57 UTC

aww, thank you for such a nice review :) I'm glad I could cheer you up, it means I wrote this right

mscatmoon January 3 2010, 09:34:07 UTC

I loved this. Thank you.

iceshade January 7 2010, 04:38:27 UTC

you're welcome <3 glad you liked