Doesn't matter that you end it here, Tezuka is alive and that's the most important! You really scared me there! I seriously thought he had left Fuji forever or that he was dead! That would have been the worst!! I'll continue reading for sure! I wanna know why Tezuka was gone for so long!
first off: your icon is gorgeous. I actually am not sure the exact reason why tez was gone so long yet, and I don't plan on exploring it in-depth right away because I want to be able to check out and discuss if the reasons I have in mind are feasible (though I am keeping the option of amnesia open as a last resort in case all of them are fail) that's why god gave us editing. XD that's the reason I specifically said I wan't trying to demean the sadness/seriousness of a1y_puff's fic, because I just have to give these two a happy ending somewhat. just be glad I wrote this one first, tezuka is ready to kill me for ehat I have him go through in his part (it's really not as bad as it sounds though). and I was going to end this quite a few sentences sooner, the realized I would kill me if I were you, so after I posted it, added a bit more.
Thanks! To be honest, I love this icon as well XD And thanks for writing those extra sentences to tell me that Tezuka wasn't dead and that Fuji wasn't dreaming or something! *bows* You don't know how to continue this story?? Well, good luck with thinking about the next chapter then!! ^___^ I hope you can keep the seriousness! Will it be angsty??
it will definitely be angsty (for some reason my angst muse is going into overload) and I know what I want to do, I just won't be saying in detail what happened to tez. and your review gave me warm and fuzzy feelings <3 also, look: I added the asterisk where I would have ended it
echizen just wormed his way into this fic and transitively into fuji's life also, which is interesting, because I borderline hate canon!echizen. and now he has a whole part in this ::headdesk:: I feel like in someway he was inspired by how he acts in the tefu doujinshi 'colorless' (which I have to say is a fairly big spoiler) thank you for your review :3
That was very, very beautiful. Fuji's letter was a real tear-jerker - and I liked the way you let Echizen figure in everything ^___^
Oh, and of course the end was wonderful. Finding that Tezuka isn't dead makes my fangirl heart very, very happy, though now I am very curious how the story will go on ^__^
thank you so much. <3 I was worried that it wasn't emotional enough, AND that it was too emotional and not fuji-like enough. (I'm gonna copy-paste from my previous comment to mitsu_syusuke on the echizen-thing) "echizen just wormed his way into this fic and transitively into fuji's life also, which is interesting, because I borderline hate canon!echizen. and now he has a whole part in this. ::headdesk::"
of course there's going to be a continuation! <3 I'm glad you liked. that was part of my logic behind fuji not geting mad right away, he was just so happy that tez was back. :)
OMG, NOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!! Cliffhanger..*sniff**sniff**tears up* well, at least Tezuka's alive..but that still doesn't explain why he didn't contact Fuji for two years in a row..*pout* post the next section soon please? ^_^
I don't think I'm going to be posting the next section for a while. I'll try and get it written, but I'm saving it for my next 30kisses prompt. and I'm still working out the kinks of tezuka's disappearance; I don't want it to be some totally off the wall idea that's completely unfeasible trust me, the cliffy is not as bad as it could have been ;D
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I actually am not sure the exact reason why tez was gone so long yet, and I don't plan on exploring it in-depth right away because I want to be able to check out and discuss if the reasons I have in mind are feasible (though I am keeping the option of amnesia open as a last resort in case all of them are fail) that's why god gave us editing. XD
that's the reason I specifically said I wan't trying to demean the sadness/seriousness of a1y_puff's fic, because I just have to give these two a happy ending somewhat. just be glad I wrote this one first, tezuka is ready to kill me for ehat I have him go through in his part (it's really not as bad as it sounds though).
and I was going to end this quite a few sentences sooner, the realized I would kill me if I were you, so after I posted it, added a bit more.
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And thanks for writing those extra sentences to tell me that Tezuka wasn't dead and that Fuji wasn't dreaming or something! *bows*
You don't know how to continue this story?? Well, good luck with thinking about the next chapter then!! ^___^ I hope you can keep the seriousness! Will it be angsty??
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and your review gave me warm and fuzzy feelings <3
also, look: I added the asterisk where I would have ended it
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and Fuji is so vulnerable here..and his dependent on Echizen makes my heart ache..*hugs him*
and Tezuka POV! i'm waiting for that! ^^
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thank you for your review :3
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Oh, and of course the end was wonderful. Finding that Tezuka isn't dead makes my fangirl heart very, very happy, though now I am very curious how the story will go on ^__^
Thank you for sharing!
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"echizen just wormed his way into this fic and transitively into fuji's life also, which is interesting, because I borderline hate canon!echizen. and now he has a whole part in this. ::headdesk::"
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thank you is there a continuation?
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that was part of my logic behind fuji not geting mad right away, he was just so happy that tez was back. :)
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trust me, the cliffy is not as bad as it could have been ;D
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