CoV fic: In the Shadows - Chapter Three

[iceraptoress]

What the - - ? Another chapter posted only three days after the last one?! Jenn, are you insane?

Yes, apparently. ^^;; Curse the voices in my head! Curse them, I say! *shakes fist at sky*

Title: In the Shadows
Chapter: Three
Fandom: City of Villains
Character: Tainted Shade aka Tag Van Keuren
Genre: Character origin
Word Count: 2,010

Comments

[amaryssobellus]

Oh no. No, no, no.

Even though I can see their point of view (Tag's parents) it's just so wrong for them to want to "fix" it. How awful for Tag. This is going to leave an emotional scar isn't it? Well that's if his parents show him this reaction. I'm really bumbed out that they're acting like this.

I personally like Tag's looks and I know Tiny does too. ^_~

Hey when do you think that you'll be on again? I'm off on Friday and Monday, if you want to join in game. I still haven't seen your new toon!

[laridian]

Ooh, interesting, without getting too "Xmen" on us. ;) And poor Tag, having to face this in upcoming times.

[kin_thalas]

I can understand Tag´s parents worries about their son, but to compare Tag´s mutant being with villains in general a bit to hard.
Otherwise... we know he´ll become a villain later, don´t we? ;)

Very well done!