Oh wow! I was visiting family and didn't feel right reading smut on the home computer. :D But I come back and you've got a fantastic B/C fic. Happy New Year to me! :D
I think this is a very disturbing, unrealistic piece..as all of yours are. This one is very ..erm...detailed. I've got to admit, you're a pretty good writer, but write about something else. I mean, come on! Carlisle and Bella?! There's something wrong with that. And anyway, where the hell is Esme in all of this? Is she completely forgotton? Also, correct me if I'm wrong, but in the one where they're in the airplane, Carlisle kisses Bella. Edward is either stupid enough to not notice, or I missed where they broke up. And isn't Carlisle a little OLD for Bella? He's like 400 years old! She's 19! What is he, a rapist now?! His character is a nice, FAITHFUL man in the books. Oh, and you must have had a LOT of practice with those "sexual contented" scenes. You know what else? Think of Stepehenie Meyer. I'd REALLY like to see her face when she reads this! These stories are ridiculously disrespectful to her. So fuck you, you stupid cocksucking whore!!
To the Anonymous user who has no respect from the anon user who does
anonymous
June 23 2009, 18:00:44 UTC
Honestly, I'm not even a part of this fandom and I can see that if you REALLY had a problem with this story then you wouldn't read it. And jeez, will you cool it with the stupid language?! I'm sure you do this just to get off or something but this author is highly respectable and competent- don't belittle her work! She writes this to have fun with different aspects of the Twilight series, I'm SURE Stephenie doesn't mind, seeing as everyone else does it too! Carlisle and Bella are actually really interesting together, and even if they weren't..ITS FANFICTION!!
I personally loved the story and think you're a fantastic writer. I follow you on fanfiction . net too :)
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why did you read it in the first place if it says in the begining what the pairing is???
don't be such a idiot.
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You really need to write more of these Carlisle/Bella stories.
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And jeez, will you cool it with the stupid language?!
I'm sure you do this just to get off or something but this author is highly respectable and competent- don't belittle her work! She writes this to have fun with different aspects of the Twilight series, I'm SURE Stephenie doesn't mind, seeing as everyone else does it too!
Carlisle and Bella are actually really interesting together, and even if they weren't..ITS FANFICTION!!
I personally loved the story and think you're a fantastic writer. I follow you on fanfiction . net too :)
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