Our Stars Scattered Like Dust (11/11)

Oct 27, 2012 17:55

Title: Our Stars Scattered Like Dust (11/11)
Authors: icedteainthebag and wishflsinfl
Characters/pairings: Adama/Roslin, Kara/Lee, Gaius/Caprica, other assorted affairs, ensemble cast
Rating: MA (graphic sex)
Warnings: AU, Character death
Spoilers: through Daybreak
Summary: As the new bartender on the cruise ship Galactica Bill Adama is hoping for an uneventful first voyage ( Read more... )

a-frakkin'-u, laura/bill, kara/lee, fic: our stars scattered like dust, authors: wishflsinfl/icedteainthebag

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ntrlstgrl October 27 2012, 23:06:39 UTC
*wail* Nooooooooooooo...

And very nicely done.

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icedteainthebag October 28 2012, 02:11:00 UTC
Thank you! I'm honored that you took this journey with us. :)

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wishflsinfl October 28 2012, 15:51:58 UTC
Thank you. :-)

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fragrantwoods October 27 2012, 23:31:18 UTC
It hurts just as much this time...beautiful, sad, and graceful. The little touches of stories that we didn't see, Ellen and how she processes this from her ageless POV, Cottle's compassion...and the gentle ushering into the dark, accompanied by exactly the right story. Perfect.

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icedteainthebag October 28 2012, 02:11:55 UTC
Thank you. I'm so glad the end worked for you. The book choice was a shot in the dark for me. I've never read it (*ducks*) but when I read about it, it seemed perfect for this situation.

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wishflsinfl October 28 2012, 11:45:49 UTC
I've never read it (*ducks*)

You aren't missing much, IMHO. As much as I love Hemingway's ability to craft a sentence, I nearly die of boredom every time I read one of his novels.

Still, that passage was a brilliant choice for the ending.

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wishflsinfl October 28 2012, 15:52:56 UTC
Thank you so much for all of the encouragement and comments and help along the way.

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defyingnormalcy October 27 2012, 23:31:21 UTC
I AM SOBBING.

Seriously, you two! I really loved how this all came together in the end, the events, their relationship, friendships, it all came full circle so beautifully. I also so loved how you explored the whole "all of this has happened before" motif in such a unique way.

Congrats on getting this baby posted in its entirety!

OH AND I AM STILL SOBBING. :( :( :(

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icedteainthebag October 28 2012, 02:13:05 UTC
Yes! I know they'll have another chance and maybe, next time, it'll work out. (So sad)

Thanks for all of the comments and for reading our epic, cracky, depressing story. :)

*hands you tissue*

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wishflsinfl October 28 2012, 15:54:15 UTC
Thank you! You can't imagine how relieved I am to hear you say that it all came together in the end.

*hugs*

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obsessive_a101 October 27 2012, 23:32:54 UTC
I...

Wha-...

I...

*smiling through tears at the moment*

This was.... very fitting actually - and The Old Man and the Sea in particular. Also, the image of Laura's many breakings and her particular character in facing them. So very, intrinsically Laura.

And the Cylons in each iteration.

Also, I hope this awesome Tory survived. :3

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icedteainthebag October 28 2012, 02:14:42 UTC
Tory did survive! At least, in my head canon she did. :) I'm glad you liked her here. I'm glad you liked so many things!

Laura and Bill (and everyone here) are survivors. They all break in different ways but somehow they all pull through.

Thanks for mainlining this story and giving us all this wonderful feedback.

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wishflsinfl October 28 2012, 15:56:44 UTC
The Old Man and the Sea was icedteainthebag's brilliant idea, as was the stained glass window metaphor which I'm in love with.

Thank you for all of the enthusiastic comments. It's been fun to see your reactions as you gobbled this fic up. :D

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hugamoose October 27 2012, 23:41:30 UTC
Great Story I really loved it!!, tough ending *sniff*

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icedteainthebag October 28 2012, 02:15:09 UTC
Thank you! I know, the ending was tough. She made me write it because she couldn't do it. So glad you read it.

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wishflsinfl October 28 2012, 15:57:36 UTC
I never could have written that ending. You did an amazing job with it.

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wishflsinfl October 28 2012, 16:00:17 UTC
Thank you for letting us know you read and enjoyed it!

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