Fleet Issue

[icedteainthebag]

Title: Fleet Issue
Author: icedteainthebag
Summary: Laura's fallen in love.
Pairing: Laura/solo with a dose of Adama!love
Rating: NC-17
Word count: 890
Kink: fleet tank fetish, ok!?
Notes: For bsg_kink's fetish week. No self-indulgence here. Nope. Not at all.

Comments

[lavenderseaslug]

Bill would give up his toothbrush to see her like this. Best. Trade-off. Ever.

Laura loving on a fleet tank makes me happy. I just really like that you can bring the hot but you can also bring the funny.

I just don't know why Bill doesn't wear his fleet tanks all the time - he'd probably make a change to the fleet uniform if he knew about Laura's obsession.

But then again, she thinks as she slips into her makeshift bedroom, she might enjoy being caught and the ensuing punishment a little too much, depending on who was doling it out. Of course, it would be the Admiral. Wearing his fleet tanks. - This, also. Good. Yes.

(It should also be important to know that when I read the kink, I thought tank was some kind of military weapon and didn't know where this was going to go.)

[icedteainthebag]

Thanks for the feedback! I'm so happy people love the toothbrush trade-off. To me, it only makes sense. That he would give up his most precious possession to see her in fleet tanks.

he'd probably make a change to the fleet uniform if he knew about Laura's obsession.

I bet he would. And she would really appreciate it. :)

I thought tank was some kind of military weapon and didn't know where this was going to go

I was a little worried it would read funny using the phrase "tank." I think I'll read through it again envisioning the armored vehicle just to see how it works out.

[missbevcrusher]

Sexy fleet tank FTW! :D ♥ *L*

[icedteainthebag]

♥ Thank you! And OMG, I just remembered I didn't read your L/L yet... do you know how happy it makes me that I get to go do it right now?!?!?!!

*L*

[missbevcrusher]

Hee!!!!!!!! LOL!!!!!!!!

Enjoy the smut. I was kinda *cough* shameless in that one. Well... shameless for me cause my pr0n is usually pretty tame.

*L*

[icedteainthebag]

It is definitely not tame. ;) *L*

[lacklusterfic]

What I really like here is that you don't specify a timeline for this story. We know it's post-Resurrection Ship, because Bill's off "admiraling"... but I think the story reaches a whole extra level of sexy if it's set early, before anything physical had happened between them. (Laura's been alone in Bill's quarters as early as the first season, I think, so she'd have plenty of opportunities for surreptitious tank-napping.)

Seriously, go back and re-read it from that perspective (say, early season 2.5) and the added hotness will blow your mind.

Bill would give up his toothbrush to see her like this.

And we all know about the love Bill has for that damn toothbrush!

[icedteainthebag]

I should have specified, but then again, maybe it was better left to the imagination. ;) But in my mind, it was pre-frakking. Because you are so, so right.... so gods damned hot if she stole it and fantasized about him and how he'd love to see her like that. ;)

Everybody loves the toothbrush!

Thanks for the feedback and for reading. I'm so happy you're around! :)

[flamingo55]

I have to second the "it's sexier if it's before they actually got together." I love the idea of Laura stealing his tank, then wearing it immediately because it smelled like him. (Um, I may have stolen a sweatshirt from my boyfriend in college for the same reason. I still have it. Of course, I also kept the guy that went with it, so I guess it's not really stolen, it's half mine. :) )

She doesn't know why she can't stop thinking about them--they look so ridiculous when the crew wears them layered, a style that serves no purpose she can fathom. Rather, it looks like they can't dress themselves and put one of their tanks on backward.

LOL they SO do.

A fleet tank and panties. Bill would give up his toothbrush to see her like this.

Yes, yes he would. And this should be the sequel.

[icedteainthebag]

It is way sexier if it's before they got together. ;)

I kinda love the sequel idea... give me your toothbrush and I'll give you a show. That toothbrush means a lot to him--not even considering that it's probably a bitch to get a new one--and it'd be interesting to see what kind of negotiations they could conduct in order for them both to get what they want. ;)

Thanks for the feedback and I'm really happy you enjoyed the story.

[flamingo55]

It would be VERY interesting to see what kind of negotiations they'd conduct. Or perhaps Bill engages in some thievery of his own, and they have a prisoner exchange. :0

[icedteainthebag]

Oh my Gods. lol. YES.

[somadanne]

This is my favorite line, too--so awesome, I truly laughed out loud:

A fleet tank and panties. Bill would give up his toothbrush to see her like this.

As flamingo55 said, I want a sequel that includes this scene.

Hot, funny, and so very enjoyable.

[icedteainthebag]

(((Anne))) Thank you, I was really in the mood for funny and hot! :)

You both have me thinking pretty hard about this toothbrush thing now. lol.

[somadanne]

Yes, I've been needing some funny and hot lately, too! This totally fit the bill.

(((((Tea)))))

[larsfarm77]

This totally fit the bill.

Well, they were his tanks :P ... sorry, couldn't resist (any* excuse to use the Mary crazy hair icon :D)

*self betaed