Tempted Ch 16

[icebreather]

OK, it's finished!  Here's the last chapter of Tempted, my John/Ellie marathon fic.  Standard disclaimers still apply.
Also: don't shoot me, but one of my quarrels with the show, plot-wise, is that so many people who know the truth or a part of the truth are being allowed to run around loose. Don't you think they'd have been quietly disappeared with

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[goddessofbirth]

Just wanted to let you know that I've thoroughly enjoyed your story! I'm new to this 'ship and came by way of my Rayne love, and I think you've got the characters down great. I'm a big fan of keeping the participants in character, so that means a lot to me. One of my favorite lines in your story is Casey saying "I don't poach." To me, that is a 100% Casey thing to do and say. Also, I love Chuck's reaction to finding them together - also something I could see Chuck on the show doing. Anyway, thanks for sharing your creativity with me.

[icebreather]

Welcome to the 'ship, and thank you! Staying in-character is one of my biggest goals, and it's made difficult with people like Casey because I tend so to the fluff; it's hard to make his core toughness come through. So it's a huge encouragement to hear from someone else who values keeping everyone in character, that they think I've got them down!

[kuryakingirl]

So worth the wait! This is just phenomenal. Seriously, one of my most favorite stories ever!

I love Chuck's reaction, his attempts to forbade them from doing anything, even remotely of the sort, ever again.

Of course, Protective!Casey is even better!! How could Ellie ever resist?

*contented sigh*

Just pure brilliance!!

~K

[icebreather]

I'm glad you like it! I'm glad it's done, and I can relax for a bit. Read other people's stuff ...

[kuryakingirl]

Enjoy your rest! I look forward to wherever you go next, whenever you decide. ;)

[xgpjryyiaksq]

hahha this is funny. i have to admit though the american accent makes me cringe a little bit. if you just made it sound a? little less ditzy and valleygirlish it would sound a million times better;) not that it really matters lol <3
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