OK, we are almost done with what turned out to be an absolute marathon of a fic (for me, at least!). One more chapter after this, and that will be all folks. Here it is, 'Tended', in which John is.
Loved Ellie's struggle to focus. Lord knows I'd have trouble. ;) Also the fact that she hasn't been able to conquer her "talking without meaning to" business is just too cute, too perfect.
I'm not sure what made me *squee* more. The "Fear" exchange, or Casey's question: “What could you possibly have to say that’s so important that it couldn’t wait a few min- a little- a good, long while?”
Got me some time off work this morning and thought i'd indulge myself...
Read this straight from Chapter 1 to this and along with Ellie I dont know how im not just a puddle on the floor right now...
Did i read right when u said this was your first fic?? Thoughts of Jellie (and more specifically Casey) have fuddled my brain.. lol... if i got that right then im sooo very impressed.... you have a really great flow and have captured all the characters accurately...
Cant wait for the next chapter (but OH! its supposed to be the last one right? :( )
Hi, welcome! No, actually, I've written fanfic for a couple of years now ... mostly Rayne (Firefly), a little L&O:CI. But I'm so glad you enjoyed this, and impressed you read it all in one sitting - it's a long one! I hope it was worth spending your precious off-time on. Yup, the next bit is the last one. It's almost ready, just needs a touch-up here and there ...
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Loved Ellie's struggle to focus. Lord knows I'd have trouble. ;) Also the fact that she hasn't been able to conquer her "talking without meaning to" business is just too cute, too perfect.
I'm not sure what made me *squee* more. The "Fear" exchange, or Casey's question: “What could you possibly have to say that’s so important that it couldn’t wait a few min- a little- a good, long while?”
Just incredible!!
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Read this straight from Chapter 1 to this and along with Ellie I dont know how im not just a puddle on the floor right now...
Did i read right when u said this was your first fic?? Thoughts of Jellie (and more specifically Casey) have fuddled my brain.. lol... if i got that right then im sooo very impressed.... you have a really great flow and have captured all the characters accurately...
Cant wait for the next chapter (but OH! its supposed to be the last one right? :( )
Tish xx
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Yup, the next bit is the last one. It's almost ready, just needs a touch-up here and there ...
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Girl, I swear we live in each other's brains...;)
Yay the hawt, shmexy shirtless interactivity! Can't wait to find out what Beckman has to say about this development...
I'm in mourning that this will be over, but who knows what else you have up your sleeve for this pairing.
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After this fic, I need a break, I think, just reading other people's stuff. Yup, that sounds good.
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That was just... perfectly beautifully steamily hot! And sweet. And funny. And... *shuddery sigh*.
Perfect.
Anticipating your final chapter so very, very much! ;D
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