Comments | icebreather: 'Tempted' chapter 9; Punished

icebreather

'Tempted' chapter 9; Punished

May 03, 2009 18:16

Despite what you may think, I haven't given up this story! It's coming along toward the end, now. I hope you're still hanging in there with me! This bit is, ah, kind of gratuitous. Couldn't help myself, despite the fact that it made me drag the Devon thing out a little longer.

Rating, disclaimer, etc. unchanged.

( Punished )

chuck, fanifc, j/ellie, john/ellie

Comments 13

impish_dragon May 4 2009, 00:29:51 UTC

I have no words to describe who good this chapter was. So can't wait for the next installment.

icebreather May 4 2009, 01:53:37 UTC

Yay! Thanks, I'll try to not make you wait too long.

gilove2dance May 4 2009, 01:25:41 UTC

WOW....*brain dead* No words can describe how passionate and bloody HOT that was!!! *wimper* How much do I want that John Casey right now? No words. Unbelievable. No worries that it is now AU, I want more Au-ness that is Jellie!!!!

icebreather May 4 2009, 01:56:46 UTC

Me too, with the wanting! Yeah, I was a little traumatized by that episode ... but I've made my peace, I guess, and have contended myself with living in AU-world. Thanks for the great review!

sunshineali May 4 2009, 03:20:45 UTC

Okay, so now I'm going to go stick my head under the kitchen sink faucet. I am so overheated from reading your mind drugs and agitated at the same time that you stopped with them both going their separate ways again. This fic (like your others) is so good that it makes me react to it. And now it's kind of like waiting another week for a new episode to come out. I'm an addict now, thanks to you Icebreather. I'm going to get the shakes and the wild, beady eyed look, the facial tics, the whole nine yards until you put them together.

I'll go away not. Oh...one more thing, I'll never look at a three tiered fountain the same way again. We're shopping around for a large one for our patio and if we get jiggy in the fountain while shopping, it will be your fault, my dear!

icebreather May 4 2009, 03:39:32 UTC

*urk*, or whatever sound a mix between a choke and a laugh might be. TRULY, I'll try not to hold out so long on the next one that you get withdrawal symptoms!!

I have been kind of rough on this pair, haven't I? Well, it's not that much longer (I don't think).

Have fun fountain-shopping ... just not so much that you get kicked out for PDA! (or maybe I mean, 'go ahead'; might be worth it, eh?)

xenaclone May 4 2009, 12:21:28 UTC

GAH!

Just hot, stuffed with UST and gorgeous.

More, more!!!

icebreather May 6 2009, 21:19:01 UTC

:-)) Well, if you insist ...

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icebreather May 5 2009, 02:39:37 UTC

And you're very welcome in it!