Prompt 26 from the table "Dean Winchester: A Year to Survive" for spn_30snapshots  

Apr 15, 2011 14:48

Title: "Summers of a lifetime"
Authorthe_milky_way
Character(s)/Pairing: Dean Winchester (Sam/Dean)
Theme: Dean Winchester: A Year to Survive
Prompt(s): 26. Summer
Rating: PG-13
Words: 1.367
Disclaimer: Characters belong to Kripke and Warner. I don't own anything.
Warnings: slight spoilers for the entire show
Beta: Thanks for the beta reading and suggestions ( Read more... )

pairing: sam/dean, fandom: spn, character: sam, spn_30snapshots, fic: fanfiction, character: dean

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Comments 25

locknkey April 15 2011, 16:28:01 UTC
I really love how you've used the seasons here to track things that are important to Dean.

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the_milky_way April 15 2011, 17:03:43 UTC
:)
Thank you. I had this idea and it's good to know that it worked out.

Thanks again. :)

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silverraven April 15 2011, 19:41:32 UTC
I know I already told you but I'll say it again, this is wonderful. It fits your prompt perfectly. And this part:

“Dean.”

One word and it means everything. It’s a question, an answer, an admission and a permission.

Just lovely!

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the_milky_way April 16 2011, 09:32:09 UTC
Thank you, again. :)

I'm so relieved that this works. I somehow had the feeling that it wasn't very coherent. :)

<33

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the_milky_way April 16 2011, 09:32:34 UTC
Thank you so much. :) I missed writing them.

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notsodamaged April 15 2011, 21:59:59 UTC
This was heartfelt and beautiful. Made me sorta nostalgic, but hopeful. Ah, Dean. ♥

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the_milky_way April 16 2011, 09:33:26 UTC
Thank you. I'm happy that this worked for you. Good to know that the nostalgic feeling is coming through. :)

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raindropfloss April 16 2011, 03:21:16 UTC
And now Sam’s pressed against him, hands on Dean’s hips, lips gently moving along heated, sweat-slick skin. It’s so new, so unexpected, that Dean freezes. Just for a second. A second in which he can enjoy just feeling Sam this close, feeling Sam being there, being with him.

Absolutely beautiful and perfect. But I think this is actually my favorite part:

The sun glaring through the dusty windshield, Dad at the wheel, Sammy snuggled up against him despite them both dripping with sweat.

Man, really well done. This is lovely and it flows beautifully. I can definitely feel summer in it. And it made me really consider what Dean's life must've been like before the show. Which is good, and I probably shouldn't have to wait for fic to come along to make me think about it.

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the_milky_way April 16 2011, 09:36:33 UTC
:)
Thank you.

I'm glad to know that the feelings are coming through.

I think the show gives some lovely glances into their past but sometimes it's not enough. I like to take fic and think about how it could have been like this. :)

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