Really liked your story. It did remind me of 'In and Out', but I liked yours better than the movie ;) You did a great job of building their increasing interest in one another. I just about died when they finally kissed one another. Thanks for writing this. You need to be sure and publish this other places too. It's too good not to be read.
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Thanks for sharing!
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Yeah, I thought it was a little less cliched to let Jared just fall for Jensen. I am glad it worked for you. :)
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I laughed so long and so hard at that line. Thank you.
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Glad it made you laugh.
Thank you for reading.
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