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ice_whisper

Time Cannot Erase

Aug 03, 2010 15:32

Title: Time Cannot Erase
Pairing/Characters: Puck/Kurt with Rachel Berry, Finn Hudson, Quinn Fabray, Artie Abrams, Tina Cohen-Chang, Mike Chang, Mercedes Jones, Matt Rutherford, Santana Lopez, and Brittany
Word Count: 1,264
Rating: PG-13
Status: Complete
Note: The first Glee fic I've posted. =) This takes place sometime after Beth got her name, but ( Read more... )

character: mercedes jones, character: kurt hummel, pairing: puck/kurt, character: artie abrams, character: matt rutherford, character: finn hudson, character: santana lopez, character: noah "puck" puckerman, character: quinn fabray, character: brittany s. pierce, character: rachel berry, fandom: glee, character: mike chang, character: tina cohen-chang

Comments 28

sony_kit82 August 4 2010, 11:34:16 UTC

I felt so lost after - the pain and hopelessness tinted with just so much emotional damage. I felt like every positive emotion was sucked out of me leaving me empty, desolate and broken - like your characters. It was painful and draining to read but it was very well done and well-written. :)

ice_whisper August 4 2010, 15:34:39 UTC

Thanks!

Glad you liked!

patronstofliars August 5 2010, 03:59:55 UTC

wow.. this is devastating. it's amazing how you tied the ways the club suffered into who they were before..

i definitely got goosebumps by the time i read "Glee Club was over.", and they stuck with me through the rest of the story.

it's weird to say a story this depressing and heartbreaking is awesome, but it absolutely is.

ice_whisper August 5 2010, 04:27:13 UTC

Thanks!

Glad you liked!

mondler_4ever August 5 2010, 14:34:38 UTC

Um...I couldn't read it all because I knew it would be too sad. I just read the last bit and now I'm trying to calm myself down so I don't cry. Just know that you are an amazing writer.

This part killed me:

It wasn’t right that he turned eighteen and that Noah, the first boy that had ever loved him back, was still sixteen and lying cold and dead in the ground.

ice_whisper August 5 2010, 14:37:26 UTC

Well, I'm glad you liked what you read! =)

glamstarwee August 6 2010, 19:50:24 UTC

I'm kinda though. So I don't really cried, but the Brittany bit? It just made me kinda break down a little. It was the best part, I think.

ice_whisper August 7 2010, 02:41:15 UTC

Thanks! I love Brittany to death, so I loved writing her little section. She's so much fun to play with.

Glad you liked!

vccv August 6 2010, 20:19:37 UTC

Well, fuck. I generally read with the self-understanding that I won't read death fics. This was like crack. I knew it would be emotionally destroying. I read the comments first, and I still read it. I wonder if crack addicts ever look at themselves after the fact and take comfort in that at least they were right about it being devastating when they went in?

Blah. This incoherent review is to tell you that your story is painfully beautiful. Thank you for sharing.

ice_whisper August 7 2010, 02:40:10 UTC

Thanks! I take it as such a compliment coming from you. =D I love your fics. Tequila is ZOMG. I have your If You Really Knew Me fic tabbed and ready to read once I finish going through e-mails. =D

Glad you liked!