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lisapy74 August 18 2012, 06:22:22 UTC
Perfect!! Nice that one of the girls was named Sarah ;)

I loved it all, but my absolute favorite part of this chapter was this:

This is it, Jonny realises, this absurd moment of staring at Patrick on a loveseat at centre ice in front of twenty-thousand screaming people, he’s fucked. This will be what ruins him, it’ll be his cocky, grinning best friend, it’ll be Patrick, who says sweet things to him in the dark of hotel rooms and isn’t serious except when he looks at Jonny after unbelievable goals and says you see what we can do.

I love this!!!!! I wish this would really happen, LOL!! :D :D

Thank you for writing this one!!

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ice_hot_13 August 20 2012, 05:02:56 UTC
Awwww <3 I'm glad you liked that part, it's my favourite!!

ME TOO :D WHY DOESN'T IT!

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lisapy74 August 26 2012, 04:49:01 UTC
Awesome!! It was totally my favorite too (great minds think alike, right)? <3

I have no idea!! We need to get jobs as PR people for the Hawks and change that immediately :D :D

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