Poem I wrote years ago.

Jun 30, 2010 02:26

Light shines through the windshield like a spoon through Jello. I see it coming as I have before, thoughts drifting through the screen door of my mind....I like to open to the good and stay closed from the bad, although they may not soak in Its crystal clear to see them slicing away at my cheese ball of affections. Although nutty I keep composure ( Read more... )

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daniel_in_black July 1 2010, 02:34:35 UTC
This makes my mind spin. I like the spinning, man. I think there should be more of this.

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icantsnap July 1 2010, 09:24:47 UTC
I love the poems that you have to read several times to really catch everything that's going on. That's what I tried to achieve with this one.

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heeeeeyooooooo July 3 2010, 18:20:44 UTC
I like it, good work sir

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