Heroes Fic: Elite (13/?)

[icalynn]

Title: Elite (13/?)
Author: icalynn
Fandom/Pairing: Mohinder/Sylar, Nathan/Peter
Word Count: 2103
Rating: R
Summary: Nathan and Peter talk, Claire visits Mohinder
A/N: Happy Memorial Day!! This is my first Nathan/Peter scene, so I hope it's okay. *g* And as always many thanks to my beta, river_rat_grrl for inspiring my muse!! *hugs

Comments

[bonniesrg]

Heh, this has made me all giddy. Love the cutesy morning scene and I don't blame Claire for peeking.lol

Mohinder was so concerned for Sylar when he admitted to taken in the virus, now I am too.
Mohinder seemed a bit peeved that Sylar had stolen his thunder, curing the virus in Simon and Monty.lol
Love Sylar gushing with Claire about how hot Momo is and like that he's not above being embarrassed by Claire's comments of the loved up pair.

[icalynn]

Thank you!! It made me all giddy too. Love that scene!

Mohinder is concerned, and he has every right to be- and yes, I think he was a little peeved about Sylar stealing his thunder sorta speak.

[helen_damnation]

"It's possible that you're body might have produced the antibodies that I've been looking for." Mohinder muses as he runs his fingers down Sylar's arm. "I need a sample of you're blood."

You're means you are. Your.

[icalynn]

*face palms* Yes, you're right... I can't believe we both missed that in the beta process! Thanks for pointing it out. :)

[river_rat_grrl]

*steps in front of Ica (who is too nice for her own good)* Ok, my bad there. I'm the beta and I totally let her down this chapter. She does the hard work of actually pulling a story out of the ether and sculpting it for public consumption. It's supposed to be my job to polish it so it's all shiny and makes people go "oooh". You wanna drop comments like that, address them to me.

Of course Ica bloody well knows what you're means, it's just the kind of slip that happens when you're typing to get everything out of your head and onto the monitor. This totally gave Ica jitters about the following post and I feel badly for her. So fair enough, you may be shit hot on grammar, spelling and punctuation but your ability to phrase criticism constructively? Not so hot. Ok?

[helen_damnation]

Sorry. I said what I needed to say, and I didn't say anything else. It's a habit. Ica, I'm sorry if I upset you. I didn't mean to. I'm socially retarded. Literally, actually; I'm autistic. Asperger's Syndrome. High IQ, low people skills.
I actually do like the fic, I just don't really know what to say. I never do.

[teecub]

Omg! I love it! Peter might finally be cluing in to the fact that he has gone nuts, Nathan is being alomst nice, Claire was treated to the view of a lifetime and - yum! - the boys are running off to play doctor! Hehe!Lovely! Thanks for sharing <3

[icalynn]

Thank you for reading and commenting!

[cellshader]

this chapter is win. the interaction, the conversation, the way sylar and mo are...Nathan being Nathan and the way he handles with Peter with such brutal honesty, and then Peter having that adorable little revelation....and...This is just wonderful and SO much fun to read. you have me fangirling this fic too often ^_^
great read.

[icalynn]

Oh, thank you!! Fangirl away! *nods*