[story] the house on fifth street

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author: kelsey l. h. (kerilu)
email: chic_ninja_love [at] hotmail.com

Comments

[wordsofastory]

Oh, very nice. I like the rhythm of your language, particularly in the first couple of paragraphs. A lovely story.

[kiyoshi_chan]

Your description is soooooooooo lovely. I love how you explained everything in such detail that I could totally picture everything Carrie saw. ♥!

[flamebyrd]

I loved the tone of this - conversationally snarky, but with touches of fairytale. The visuals in particular were stunning.

[still_ciircee]

What a wonderful story! It's so full of vivid imagines and wonderful descriptions. I could really feel for Carrie. And I love that the first spoken line is the last line of the story. "Are you coming in?" --what a wonderful way to end this story!