[story] five days with the bride of the ocean

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author: ruffwriter (ruffwriter)
email: ringhappy [at] comcast.net

Comments

[fightfair]

I've been waiting for this to go up so I could comment on how beautiful it is! I love the style in this one - whimsical, fairytale-like, sweet.

[mistressnaoko]

This is wonderful! Thank you.

[sub_divided]

Hey, it's the opening story! Congratulations!

I want to apologize to ruffwriter for taking some liberties with the beginning of the story. There was more suspense before, but I thought it would be better for the readers to be able to picture more precisely such a dramatic scene. Sorry if I got any details wrong.

About the story: I love Aone, she has a great personality! And she's aged so gracefully! Maris is a bit unpolished, but hopefully she'll improve. :p It's a very cute story. Summer house exploration, and the supernatural, are a great match.

[ext_185498]

I enjoyed this story a lot, thank you for writing it!

[bratfarrar]

Gorgeous!