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[story] once upon a bridge

May 29, 2010 17:12

author: eve
e-mail: stormofblossoms [ at ] gmail dot com

( As far as Dong Yao could tell, he and the woman with the veiled hat started to cross the bridge at the same time. )

author: eve, book 21: wuxia, story

Comments 7

februaryfour May 31 2010, 03:37:33 UTC

VERY nice! ♥ I loved this to bits, actually. You need to write more!

lilacfield May 31 2010, 03:42:02 UTC

Thank you! :) I have a lot of bunnies for this 'verse, I really should make use of them.

februaryfour May 31 2010, 03:48:49 UTC

You should--you've got the wuxia voice (whatever counts for it in English) down.

helike May 31 2010, 20:57:01 UTC

Dong Yao seems to be a very interesting character. With a death wish ^^;
I liked the story :)

lilacfield June 1 2010, 01:20:02 UTC

He's just reckless, and very young...When he's old he'll be able to afford being reckless, since his martial skills are already better ;)
Thanks :)

kurifurinkan June 1 2010, 01:34:25 UTC

Oh, man, this was so great. I am in love with the imagery; if I could draw it would be so easy to illustrate this, since not only can I see the characters so clearly in my head, but the surroundings, too; the cool greys and greens and browns of the river and Zhong Ma's amazing outfit.

Also, that fight scene made my entire year. ♥ hearts;♥

lilacfield June 1 2010, 01:45:06 UTC

Thank you, glad you enjoyed it :) I had fun writing the fight scene, myself.