Leave a comment

Comments 28

glass_icarus March 29 2010, 17:51:07 UTC
AHAHAHAHAHAHA. &hearts Loved this! :D

Reply

lacewood March 30 2010, 01:50:00 UTC
Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it! XD

Reply


tongari March 30 2010, 03:39:45 UTC
I LOVE MR WU

"you fellows don't do reincarnation right"

and Wenhui

"Mr Wu, next time please try to be clearer about these things. Otherwise it's very confusing and makes a lot of trouble for everyone, you know."

I could sort of see the whole thing happening like a quiet local drama xD; probably I'm too familiar with the bureaucracy woes and office politics and waiting for government services and conspiratorial theories with colleagues over lunch. BUT THE TAOISM OFFICE AND THE CHRISTIAN OFFICE ;____;

<3 <3 <3 i must express my love for this story

Reply

lacewood March 30 2010, 09:55:52 UTC
I'm glad you liked Mr Wu! I had no idea how this was really going to end until he finally showed up, true fact, ahaha.

I also had no idea if I could actually write the dialogue right, so really really glad you think this reminds you of actual experience/a wacky local drama XD;;;

Reply


fantasyecho March 30 2010, 17:50:43 UTC
This is amazing! Great concepts, wonderfully simply story with fab execution!

It needs to become its own mini-series / TV show or something.

Reply

lacewood March 31 2010, 03:09:02 UTC
Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it! :)

Reply


bratfarrar March 31 2010, 01:40:30 UTC
This is hilarious--especially as the further I got into the story, the more certain I became that the whole thing was going turn out to be some sort of mix-up.

And this: One week later, Li Dong suddenly asked, "Hey, how come he didn't just let his side file the request through the transfer department? Isn't that how they usually do it?"

"What?"

He added more vinegar to his noodles, and said, "The Transfer department handles external transfers too, not just internal. The red tape probably takes forever, but he didn't have to come and do it himself."

Perfect ending. Absolutely perfect.

Reply

lacewood March 31 2010, 03:12:00 UTC
Thank you, I'm glad you liked it (and that the humour worked) XD

Reply


jolantru March 31 2010, 03:39:59 UTC
This is great! (as a Singaporean, I totally heart it!)

:)

Reply

lacewood March 31 2010, 07:02:19 UTC
Thank you, I'm glad you like it, especially as a Singaporean too XD

Reply


Leave a comment

Up