[story] this seat next to you

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author: gyoku

artist: yue ix (yue_ix)
email: yue.ykx [at] gmail.com

Comments

[aefallen]

*grin* First story I chose to read, and I'm glad I chose this!

"I don't like talking in public. It comes out wrong most of the time," Zack says, frustration creeping into his voice. "It pisses people off. So I just keep quiet."
I liked this.

Comic Con and playing Halo. ♥ You're kind of speaking right to the immensely geeky side of me, incidentally. ♥

Zack whips his head around, making sure that there's nobody eavesdropping on their conversation.
The whole exchange leading up to this made me grin from ear to ear. ♥

I liked the art that went with this, too! The shading and depth was well-done. And yay, perspective!

[yue_ix]

Artist here - thank you very much! Yay for perspective indeed, as it was made to match a pivotal change in the character's relationship. Glad to know you enjoyed that. ^__^

[dramatic__]

I really adore Zack's character, how he's so quiet and naive. It's a contrast to Bryan's character, but the interaction between the two was great!

It was a really wonderfully written and lighthearted piece!

[wordsofastory]

Oh, what a sweet story! I really like the relationship here; your characters are so cute and realistic. Very enjoyable read.

And the art! How nice! I really like the stylization, particularly the colors. It's really nicely done. It looks so polished.