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arrghigiveup August 3 2008, 15:42:49 UTC
Ths was... very cool. Dark and enticing and bittersweet.

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theloyalist August 3 2008, 17:52:56 UTC
oh, this was beautiful! the language you used was perfect, and I liked that you used the Japanese speech markers instead of apostrophes.

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dramatic__ August 6 2008, 07:08:27 UTC
Rei, I envy you. Your writing is so beautiful and it blends so many elements of Japanese culture!

Also, I didn't know you wrote for IB!

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passionfire August 13 2008, 20:43:22 UTC
This was beautiful, Reirei. I love your folklore-based stories.

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wordsofastory November 17 2008, 19:59:36 UTC
This is really well-written! You have a gorgeous hand with language. (I don't really get what this has to do with travel, but then I suppose it must just be its own thing, rather than written to the prompt. It would be awesome for Halloween, hee!) But I really enjoyed this story. It was lovely and creepy.

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rei_kurasaki November 21 2008, 12:32:00 UTC
(I er wrote it with the idea of how the moon god will take him away? It-It made sense in my head. ;____; the "travel" part came during the last section, when yuji finally left with him.......of course whether or not he consented to it is another thing totally. XD) Glad you liked! ♥

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