Arcady nodded. "There has to be some kind of legend about this place," he said.
"Yeah," said Kai, quietly. "Maybe I can finally get some answers."
*echos this* Nifty--I love the details scattered throughout that really give it taste and texture and weight of reality, and it's fun to see Kai and Arcady figure out their friendship again (and Makani is always awesome)--
But it does feel like a piece of something much bigger, and I'd love to have a better glimpse of what it is. Not that this doesn't stand on its own, but now I want more!
I don't think Kai exactly has a ~fabulous destiny~ awaiting him or anything, but he's been shown a glimpse of the spirit world now and his life is probably only going to get weirder from now on.
Anyway, glad you liked these stories! I had a lot of fun with the worldbuilding and creating the characters (and the actual writing, when I wasn't stressing out over deadlines.)
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I took the liberty of adding you to my friendslist so that I could link you http://flamebyrd.livejournal.com/tag/technomancy, which has one short with Sebastien.
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"Yeah," said Kai, quietly. "Maybe I can finally get some answers."
*echos this* Nifty--I love the details scattered throughout that really give it taste and texture and weight of reality, and it's fun to see Kai and Arcady figure out their friendship again (and Makani is always awesome)--
But it does feel like a piece of something much bigger, and I'd love to have a better glimpse of what it is. Not that this doesn't stand on its own, but now I want more!
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Anyway, glad you liked these stories! I had a lot of fun with the worldbuilding and creating the characters (and the actual writing, when I wasn't stressing out over deadlines.)
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