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[story] laid the unsprung trap with bait

Mar 30, 2008 03:08

author: whitecat (nekokoban)
email: nekokoban [at] gmail.com

artist: olukemi (olukemi)
email: a.akeju [at] gmail.com

( There was no reason to be worried, Fix tried to console himself. )

book 08: gendertwist, artist: olukemi, story, author: whitecat, art

Comments 4

issen4 March 31 2008, 02:59:26 UTC

Excellent! I loved the way both sets of disguises were revealed here. Lux is a fantastic character.

reversedhymnal March 31 2008, 19:57:06 UTC

♥swoons♥

That was lovely and fantastic and beautifully written! :D

gisho April 1 2008, 11:17:24 UTC

<3<3<3

Brilliant. I quite like Fix. It would be childish to demand a sequel, wouldn't it?

wordsofastory July 28 2008, 21:16:10 UTC

Okay, now, that was awesome. I love the double-twist in this story, that Fix isn't the only one disguised. And the Dragon is a totally excellent, amazing character. I adore her.

The art is really great, too. I really like the way you captured both characters; there's just the right amount of androgyny to them.